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Step Sister's Plaything
Author: dark horse
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(Added on Apr 18, 2004)
(This month 127004 readers) (Total 192776 readers) |
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A man who always dreamed about being controller by an unknown becomes his step sister's slave by accident. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
| Average
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Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Sep 30, 2005 |
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Great concept, but felt the envelope was pushed too quickly, too soon. Subject's acceptance of his role and its harshness defied credibilty, even whent this aspect is usually suspended, which is what makes it fantasy. However, even in fantasy, this seemed too much, too soon for this reader. (7/10)
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Abe Froman
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Mar 8, 2005 |
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A good concept, and a pretty good story. I would have like to see more realistic reaction from him, and while her control seems to be enjoyed, I didn't find it very realistic. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bob4954
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Sep 20, 2004 |
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I thought this story was very good and I enjoyed reading it. I hope the author continues with this story. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Jul 20, 2004 |
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Not too bad of story, but it was lacking something like a dog collar and leash. (6/10)
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wrighter4u
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Jun 15, 2004 |
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I found the story content to be very good and interesting. I paid little attention to the spelling errors. I am enjoying the story. Please continue it. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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Very good concept to the story although towards the end of the first chapter, things seemed a bit rushed. A little editing would help. (7/10)
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trainmanretep
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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the 7 is for the concept and content. There is a need to proof read because the story could be greatly improved by tweaking of the language. (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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This is a good concept, but the writing skills are really lacking. You need to get someone to proof this for you. (6/10)
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abitbent
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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Keeping the Domme in this story unpredictable was very nice. Grammar and spelling are absolutely brutal. I susupect English isn't the author's first language, which may explain why. (5/10)
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crickette
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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I liked reading Step Sister`s Plaything. It seemed a little rushed but would make a good beginning for further chapters. I must say however that he took to his new role beautifully. No mus...very little fus. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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It's a good little read, but it felt a little 'clumsy' in places to me. I'm sure someone here reviewing, who's a lot more articulate than me, will be able to explain it better. And, oh boy don't I feel like the munchkin calling the midget short for saying this, but it needs a good proofread. Unfortunately there are a number typos/spellos that are just simply jarring. (7/10)
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