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Side Bar to The Friend
Author: Angel Dawn
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(Added on Feb 27, 2004)
(This month 9359 readers) (Total 19447 readers) |
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What happed to the rapist? Did he get off? Of course he did many many times but the real question is did he get away with his crime unpunished? hmmmm You will have to read to find out. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 7, 2012 |
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"Side Bar..." is indeed plagued by the lack of proper punctuation and a syntax which is slightly off-kilter, but I liked the set up and most of the time the the writing too.
Because -lack of punctuation marks aside- this is cleverly written.
A pity Angel Dawn stopped posting stories on the Library, for the talent is unmistakably there. Only the execution needs a bit of polishing...
Was going to go for an eight "score" but adding two points to compensate for bisarah's ridiculous behaviour.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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The title indicates that this story relates to the earlier story, "The Friend." It does not stand on its own, it could have been linked more clearly to "The Friend," and it has the same level (although a different selection) of grammatical problems as "The Friend." Except for the incomplete coding (snuff, for example), I do not understand why this story is rated lower than "The Friend." The author continues the "just desserts" theme from the earlier story and the presentation of prison sex is consistent with many reports. (8/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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too much bad spelling and grammar... where is the character development? there is no insight into the feelings or motivations of the people involved. (3/10)
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Enos Quill
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Feb 29, 2004 |
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A very, very dark tale. A primal scream of a story -- this scream is about vengeance. (5/10)
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bisarah
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Feb 28, 2004 |
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Had I known this story included snuff, I would not have read it. (1/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 3, 2004)
- If you don't like snuff stories, and many people don't, why bother savaging it? Your "review" says nothing about the merit of the work, which leads me to suspect that my question does not need to be answered.
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