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Mistress Z
Author: Doug Young
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(Added on Jan 27, 2004)
(This month 57588 readers) (Total 77973 readers) |
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Submissive finally finds a Mistress to use him. Unfortunately he must submit to things he had not considered. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
treyhouston
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May 12, 2008 |
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Great start. Looking forward to more chapters. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Apr 12, 2005 |
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Excellent beginning. Great story telling andi hope to read more. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
benstrap
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Aug 24, 2004 |
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Very arousing story and well written. His humiliation and bisexuality are very well expressed. Keep on writting......you got it !!! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Marion
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Jan 29, 2004 |
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Found it to be worthwhile reading. Got the feeling that the character dicky was actually the author revealing his homosexual desires rather than his submissiveness. You can tell when he is forced into oral sex the story gets a little more intense and it is as if he is envisioning himself submitting and relishing the experience. He may never have come out of the closet, but he has strong desires and that is underscored by his final line in the story. Mistress Z is only part of the story to enable him to encounter this opportunity to describe submitting to performing oral sex, which he does quite well. (7/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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A good start, but I hope there is a lot more to come soon. You need to justify that CBT code with something a little more profound than a couple of slaps. (7/10)
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robert216
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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Excellent beginning, more chapters to be added I hope. (9/10)
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