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The Soldier
Author: Kirsten Smart
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(Added on Jan 18, 2004)
(This month 100249 readers) (Total 141072 readers) |
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This 'story' is actually a favourite personal fantasy set out in story form. A pretty and athletic female soldier in a peace-keeping force is captured and tortured for information she simply doesn't have, by a beautiful and sadistic woman torturer. Suspension, electric shocks, a racking, then more suspension. Reasonably extreme. |
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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I think this is one of the best capture/torture stories I have read, thanks to the appealing way in which this is written, due to the endearing figure of Kirsten. I also agree that things are a tad stretched at times, but it works and everything fits eventually. JJ (10/10)
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LSkunk
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Oct 5, 2007 |
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Oh my...what an ending! I agree that Kirsten Smart is the best author that I have read in the BDSM genre. Thank You (10/10)
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tsosie
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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Great story, very interesting scenario that appears to cater to some of my personal fantasies as well :) Great job. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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Ah ha, my chance to disagree with everyone. This one I give a ten for writing and for fantasy. Physiologically implausable, not my particular kink, but surrealistic and fantastic. The author's previous story "Witch" was much more realistic. But reality does not really appear to be the intention of this author, fantasy is. Great job. In a bizarre way this is a love story, the author is in love with the rack, the rending of bones and tearing of ligaments. Is it possible that the author is an orthopedic surgeon deeply in the closet? Definetely the best new talent on this site in a while. (10/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable. A very good first-person story of unrelenting torture--without spilling blood. Very easy to read. The "time problem" mentioned by others did not bother me. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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This is a very well written story. It is not erotica, so don't bother with it if you are looking for a turn-on. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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Good story, but a little repetitive in the descriptions. I'll also have to agree with others that the woman wouldn't have a good sense of the amount of time while being abused. Perhaps being more abstract in that sense would be better. Otherwise, quite an enjoyable story. (7/10)
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BruceBoxer
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Good premise and descriptions of the torment; however, each torment was described similarly. What I found most disconcerting was our heroine taking time hacks when the conept of time as one is being abused would be very difficult to ascertain. It was a worthy read. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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where do you go from here?? (7/10)
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Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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While this latest story by K. Smart does read well, it is something of a stretch to imagine one subjected to such torture - real or otherwise - having the presence of mind (in the first person) to describe various reactions from such torment. Isn't the point of physical abuse to also inflict disorientation upon the mind as well? Anyway, for a driver's seat version of being on the business end of abuse this story is worth reading. (7/10)
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