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Omens - A Halloween Tale
Author: Musker
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(Added on Mar 6, 2001)
(This month 81828 readers) (Total 112737 readers) |
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Five young women crash an exclusive and eletist Halloween party and get caught. The hostess has some strange ways of making the gold digging five pay for their mistake. Now they get more than they expected from the deal. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 16, 2009 |
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Great build-up and pace. Well done!
JJ (9/10)
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bmtphoenix
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Aug 3, 2007 |
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My ONLY complaint was that it was quite slow getting to anything worth reading. I understand building back story, but considering it doesn't really matter much in this case, I feel most of chapter one could've been skipped.
But the rest was a special kind of excellent. :) (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Phyro
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Nov 9, 2002 |
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- (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 15, 2002 |
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The author has a sure hand with dialogue (especially among the girls) and a gift for describing costumes etc. Aside from those strong points the writing style is only fair. And it takes a lonnng time for the story to develop and gain intensity. One disconcerting 'error'(I think) -- the name Su-Lee sounds Chinese to me, not Japanese. All in all a good effort (7/10)
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tedebear690
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Mar 7, 2002 |
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I loved this story because it was semi-blackmail (they'd go to jail or be sex slaves for 2 months)and of course the non-consensual, forced nature of what was being done to each of these girls. It was BD & SM to the extreme, with painful, tight bondage and the humiliation level that the girls experienced had to peg the meter which measured it. With 5 girls to work on, by 5
different, though all very dominant and very experienced Masters, the tortures, and humiliations are so varied that it boggles the mind. (10/10)
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ponywendy
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Jan 14, 2002 |
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This is a fantastic story. Great character development make the characters seem real. It has almost everything. Bondage, restraints, body mods (I could go on but I'll let you read it instead). I wish there was more at the end - what happened to the people after the end of the story (hint: let us know:-)) (10/10)
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ownedgirl
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Oct 21, 2001 |
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Wonderful story. Very well written, a great plot-line, and the characters were all made interesting and real. Enjoyed it very much (9/10)
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