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Sara's South American Adventure
Author: Thor
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 83887 readers) (Total 129530 readers) |
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A high school girl on a trip with her mother and her recently deceased father's business partner. She is caught smuggling drugs into a foreign country which has severe punishment for such actions. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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so far so good, please keep more chapters coming (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Jan 9, 2004 |
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The story is ok.
The humiliation is well done and even his english
is not perfect I enjoyed reading it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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Poor grammar and capitalization hurts, but the bigger problem lies in how it was written. There is some promise with the plot, although not original. However, everything seems a bit disjointed and lacking transition throughout. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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Not a very interesting story beyond the same old plt. Not capitalizing the protagonist's name was disconcerting. Somewhat preposterous ending. (6/10)
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