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Occupational Hazzards Author: Bruce Boxer
(Added on Jul 1, 2000) (This month 172176 readers) (Total 247388 readers)
A military interrogator recareers as a torturer for a secret organization.

Ratings and Reviews:
Number of Ratings: 66
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Weighed Average (?): (7/10)
Average Rating: (7/10)
Highest Rating: (10/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: moonrabbit (Edit) Rating: Mar 4, 2009
Excellent! (10/10)

Reviewer: metoo (Edit) Rating: Mar 21, 2007
seemed like a lession.... (6/10)

Reviewer: Travis (Edit) Rating: Nov 11, 2006
Thoroughly enjoyed it. (10/10)

Reviewer: Samantha (Edit) Rating: Jan 20, 2006
Loved it. For anyone who is into interogation (or torture), they should enjoy this story very much. I found that there were some unexpected plot redirections which aided in keeping the reader interested. I also found the descriptions of how the prisoners/victims were bound, restricted and tortured very vivid. I could really form an image in my mind. Like that too. What I also liked was the fact that you didn't bombard your writing with an unneccary use (or abuse) of adjectives and descriptions. Oh! You may want to check the formatting towards the last 6 or so chapters as the writing is wrapping around in strange way. That destracts the reader is all. So you might want to look into why tha wrapping effect is happenig mid-line I look forward to reading more of your stories. (10/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Sep 8, 2003
Hope there is more, and I hope you focus more on the female prissoners (8/10)

Reviewer: CoffinNail (Edit) Rating: Dec 31, 2002
Closes eyes, swallows back the bile . . .
Save yourselves, folks--run away!
--CN (1/10)

Reviewer: Tim_Id (Edit) Rating: Sep 19, 2002
Overall a good effort. Too clinical at first, later the story flows easier. At times it gets too brutal. Makes me think of those Rocky movies, like how much abuse can a person take and come back for more? Could use more sex. (7/10)

Reviewer: hdsport93 (Edit) Rating: Nov 3, 2001
Thought it was very well written and hot--where do you get an application for a job there :) (10/10)

Reviewer: Darryl Rating: Nov 25, 2000
Looking for sexy stories; found this junk about torture. (1/10)

Reviewer: Paul J. Rating: Nov 19, 2000
Pitiful attempt at telling a tale. (1/10)

Reviewer: Cheeky Rating: Nov 18, 2000
One word: BAD. (1/10)

Reviewer: Nosey Rating: Nov 18, 2000
Lipper is wrong -- this story appears to have been written by an illiterate person who doesn't know how to chose which (or is it witch) sound-alike word to use. (1/10)

Reviewer: Lipper Rating: Nov 18, 2000
What a bunch of illiterates...sigh (10/10)

Reviewer: al2 Rating: Nov 18, 2000
nothing sexy or hot in this stinker (1/10)

Reviewer: Claire Rating: Nov 18, 2000
I was looking for a "Hot Story" but this one was a stinker. I'd have given it a "0" if it was possible... (1/10)

Reviewer: John Rating: Nov 18, 2000
piss poor. read it all hoping it'd get better, but it was a major waste of my time... (1/10)

Reviewer: al Rating: Nov 17, 2000
very good, read it all (10/10)

Reviewer: Joanne Rating: Nov 16, 2000
Just awful. (1/10)

Reviewer: Fred Rating: Nov 15, 2000
Suzi is so right - this is a terrible excuse for a story! I can't believe that AlmaLou even read this garbage....if she did, she'd know how bad it is and how bad the grammer errors are in it. (1/10)

Reviewer: AlmaLou Rating: Nov 15, 2000
Good story! (10/10)

Reviewer: Suzi Rating: Nov 15, 2000
This is not a story. There is no storyline. It's only a series of vignettes -- and they are of the "mechanical" variety (ie: put rope on part a, pull tight, attach weight to part be...) (1/10)

Reviewer: anna39 Rating: Nov 11, 2000
Very erotic! (10/10)

Reviewer: hutzzer Rating: Nov 9, 2000
Think this was an outstanding story and written very well. (10/10)

Reviewer: B&D&Me Rating: Oct 29, 2000
nothing stimulating or provacative here very mundane and boring and i agree that the way it was written was pretty bad. (3/10)

Reviewer: Wilberfont Rating: Oct 26, 2000
goodone (10/10)

Reviewer: M-Man Rating: Oct 24, 2000
Not as bad as the bondage on a boat story, but not a real lot better either. And i agree with some of the other reviewers. Someone is playing games trying to inflate the rating of this story. Sheeesh. Why bother ????? (2/10)

Reviewer: Wrigley Rating: Oct 23, 2000
Outstanding to awful--I vote for the former--good job Bruce Boxter! On to more stories! (10/10)

Reviewer: Shinerson Rating: Oct 23, 2000
Superb! Then I read the other reviews--it's dod-eat dog isn't it? (10/10)

Reviewer: Quick2serve Rating: Oct 22, 2000
I checked this #1 "Hot story" and thought it was great. I don't understand all the nasty slams. As I looked at the other rankings, I think I finally figured it out. Authors trying to screw each other. And on a free web page --sheesh. (10/10)

Reviewer: Dave Rating: Oct 22, 2000
Awful ! (1/10)

Reviewer: Maree. Rating: Oct 22, 2000
Silly plot and the writing is SO bad ! (1/10)

Reviewer: Melissa the Grouch Rating: Oct 15, 2000
I liked the violence! (10/10)

Reviewer: Shiela Rating: Oct 14, 2000
Exquisite. Really enjoyed it. (10/10)

Reviewer: Harry Rating: Oct 7, 2000
Nice storyline; fine tortures (9/10)

Reviewer: 1st Base. Rating: Oct 5, 2000
I think _snake_ is onto something. It was the number of reviews that attracted my attention to this story. The stories ok, but I can undferstand that the way it was written could be irritating to a lot of people. (5/10)

Reviewer: Snake Rating: Oct 1, 2000
The reviews of this story are far more interesting that the story itself. It's rather odd that everytime someone submits a review that is critical of the story, there's a sudden splurge of '10/10' reviews. Someone called 'The Tennant' says they didn't like it, and then amazingly, someone coincidently called 'The Landlord' comes along with a 10/10. THREE 10/10s on the same day in fact? Then 2 more, and another 2 more on consecutive days???? Not very subtle really, and all rather amusing. This story is no 10/10, it's not too bad, but the reviews are good for a laugh. (3/10)

Reviewer: Simply me Rating: Oct 1, 2000
As a submissive to a couple, I love to read about bdsm and sexual torture. This story was right up my alley. (10/10)

Reviewer: Lorimanners Rating: Oct 1, 2000
Suberp. Well written and exciting. (10/10)

Reviewer: Julia Rating: Sep 30, 2000
I'm being featured in Bruce's next story--it'll be as good as this one! (10/10)

Reviewer: SourGirl Rating: Sep 30, 2000
Loved it! (10/10)

Reviewer: Paul Rating: Sep 27, 2000
Good writing, good plot--lot's of twists and turns, Especially turned me on. (10/10)

Reviewer: Bill Rating: Sep 27, 2000
Great BDSM; I liked the twins as well! (10/10)

Reviewer: The Landlord Rating: Sep 27, 2000
To each his own--wonderful style and story! (10/10)

Reviewer: The Tennant. Rating: Sep 27, 2000
I thought it was pretty ordinary. Didn't like the way it was written at all. (3/10)

Reviewer: Posiden Rating: Sep 26, 2000
Loved it! (10/10)

Reviewer: Jenn C. Rating: Sep 26, 2000
Excellent story. I thought it was hot. Especially like the twin torturers--good characterzation. (10/10)

Reviewer: Baxter Rating: Sep 12, 2000
There seems to be a diverse range of opinions on this story. Personally, I didn't like it much at all. (3/10)

Reviewer: Betts Rating: Sep 10, 2000
I think it's a terrific story--would like to see mor from this author. (10/10)

Reviewer: Kim Rating: Sep 6, 2000
This story isn't the 'best of the bunch' nor is it 'amateur time' in my opinion. It's ok. Perhaps when Randy gets to 7th grade he might have a better understanding of 'proper English'??? (4/10)

Reviewer: Randy Rating: Sep 4, 2000
A Brunette Woman, and the other 7th graders may have had a hard time reading this story because it used proper English an punctuation. (10/10)

Reviewer: Julie Rating: Sep 4, 2000
Best of the bunch! (10/10)

Reviewer: ABrunetteWoman Rating: Aug 30, 2000
I found the way it was written made it very difficult to read too. (5/10)

Reviewer: James Rating: Aug 30, 2000
Not bad, but the writing style makes it very hard to read. (4/10)

Reviewer: Brocky Rating: Aug 27, 2000
To borrow the phrase of another reviewer. Ameteur Time. (2/10)

Reviewer: TJ Rating: Aug 27, 2000
A good idea, very poorly executed. (1/10)

Reviewer: rajat Rating: Aug 26, 2000
excellant, such innovative situations, please keep it up. (10/10)

Reviewer: Sioban Rating: Aug 20, 2000
Tr¨¨s merveilleux! Merci! (10/10)

Reviewer: Dieter Rating: Aug 19, 2000
Sehr gute Geschichte. Das Zeichen Travis wurde gut entwickelt. (10/10)

Reviewer: Susan Rating: Aug 15, 2000
I know the author and he spent a lot of time polishing this saga--and it shows--good job Bruce! (10/10)

Reviewer: Cisco Rating: Aug 14, 2000
Outstanding story--exciting and hot. (10/10)

Reviewer: Jim Rating: Aug 6, 2000
Jesus! You think stuff like this really goes on? I'm moving to Maryland! (10/10)

Reviewer: Gunther Rating: Aug 3, 2000
Super! Loved it! (10/10)

Reviewer: Tracy Rating: Aug 2, 2000
Excellent plot and good description. I want to BE in this story! (10/10)

Reviewer: Tina Rating: Aug 1, 2000
Oh my God! I'm STILL wet after reading this :) Outstanding! (10/10)

Reviewer: Sara Rating: Jul 31, 2000
I loved this story. Adventure, mental turmoil, strong women, strong men--it was all here. (10/10)

Reviewer: Robert Rating: Jul 4, 2000
Wow! What an epic! Lot's of situations, vivid descriptions--hot sex! Bravo! (10/10)

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