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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Denkira
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Dec 22, 2014 |
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good pony play aspects and bdsm (10/10)
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DON609
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May 29, 2011 |
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Loved the story. Beyonce as a Pony, Cool. have read it a few times just that fun. (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Though not an amateur of spoofs, I found this tale to be very enjoyable and well written.
JJ (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
USMC4ME
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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Girl Girl Girl you have to write another story! You have a gift. And brainstorming would be such fun right? - LOL
See where it takes you - and remeaber to go slow and steady, keep our minds transfixed on her body, and her strain and sweet suffering. Maybe throw in a "Good Cop" character somewhere along the plot for a twist.
Good luck!
(10/10)
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| Reviewer:
nyko
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Jun 26, 2005 |
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I liked it, well written, very descriptive, I would like to see more, get typing girl (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
jake_t42
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Jun 5, 2005 |
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This story was written so long ago I guess the writer isn't expanding or writing any more ponygirl stories :(
I also loved this story, because it is the most forced and extreme pony girl story I have ever read, and there aren't any out there that have come even close to the quality of this.
I liked how every moment of trotting caused her discomfort, I would have liked to hear her describe the feeling of being plugged with the dildos a bit more, maybe some description of what the Mistress was seeing as she exercised her :) An extra torment would be making her do her pony training with the enama still in her.
I hope this author does another story.
(9/10)
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| Reviewer:
TAW
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May 4, 2005 |
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I loved this story. The author does a great job describing the "breaking" of Beyonce. The details of her training, her outfits and even her inner narrative are all realistic and allow for a suspension of disbelief. Plus which..I just *love* the idea of Beyonce being treated like this.
I just wish the author hadn't chosen to give her a Mohawk. Overall though, this story just rocks!
I would have to say...my only complaint is that it has left me wanting more...more...more!. Please...write another chapter...or two...or three! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kleintje15
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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very well written story not to slow not to fast and a great cum (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Enrique Calzada
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May 4, 2004 |
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Part one was a truly excellent pure bondage tale,
even if a bit formulaic. Excellent pacing and attention to detail.
Parts two and three did not, in my opinion, maintain the intensity.
My only serious gripe would be that a fictional victim
might have broadened the appeal.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grey Slayer
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Jan 27, 2004 |
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Enjoyable story so far. Well written and engaging. I am eager to read of the additional trails and (of course!) punishments that Beyonce has to endure. (8/10)
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reverie35
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Jan 23, 2004 |
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Segments two and three have developed well. I like your descriptions of the control that the pony expereinces, the boredom of being a pony and the use of the whip by the mistress. A story that continues to get better. Keep writing!! (9/10)
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Darkstar2173
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Jan 20, 2004 |
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Its a good story. I love it when ungrateful and stuck up people get whats coming to them. (7/10)
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bracemaiden
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Dec 30, 2003 |
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I think that the story codes could have been more detailed - this was NC, exhibition, etc... The story codes should have also given some clue to the pain aspect.
I agree that the celebrity protagonist was a bit far-reaching, but a lot of the general writing was good.
The hair trimming and removal of vocal cords were good plot devices, and I liked the addition of the butt-plug and dildo. The humiliation scenes were well written.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Kira
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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Very nice Ponygirl story already by starting, I can't wait for the next hot parts, some body modification is everytime on right place here. She is a great pop singer, also in fantasy she makes as a ponygirl a nice figure. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 13, 2003 |
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Love Pony Girl Stories, only wish you had use a non celebritiy in the story line, it would make it far more belevable (9/10)
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cagedsgt
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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One of those that you want to go on and on and on and well where's the rest. (9/10)
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AndrewBlack
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Dec 1, 2003 |
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Fantastic ponygirl story. Can't wait for the next installment! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
steph
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Nov 30, 2003 |
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One of the best ponygirl stories i have read. my heart was racing with excitement! (9/10)
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tormented
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Nov 26, 2003 |
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poor beyonce, cant wait for the next part of her ordeal.. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Bonif51
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Nov 25, 2003 |
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Wonderful ponygirl story. I hope the author continues to write other stories. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Anita Parker
(Edit) (Dec 4, 2003)
- This is the first story I have written and certainly the first thing I have submitted on-line. It's great to know someone actually likes it!
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