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Sara II
Author: XtremeInk
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(Added on Nov 12, 2003)
(This month 39418 readers) (Total 78773 readers) |
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Sara, Jane and Vicky are back! Jane and Vicky have LOTS of torturous fun planned for little Sara. This is a continuation of the Sara series, but the story is a stand alone. WARNING> It's pretty extreme. And if you didn't like the... unsanitary aspects of the first one, you won't like this one either. OTOH, there's LOTS of great torture in little Sara's future as she continues being used by Vicky and Jane for their pain toy. And boy have they found ways to make Sara hurt. |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Just as our main man Lex, I also felt (just like in the first 'Sara') that things were rushed a tad, going from one torture to the next mangling of the poor lass. But somehow, in 'Sara 2', it doesn't come across as such. At least, not that much.
Writing is better too, in my opinion, as is the interaction between the goils.
Serious stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
qc_94
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Feb 11, 2004 |
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Wow, literaly leaves me breathless! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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The amount of pain and suffering that the 13 year old victim endures is a bit beyond belief, even for this reader. After a time I became at times as numb as Sara. The author has an imagination that ranks right up there with anyone writing extreme material, but it doesn't always seem to be under control. The proofing is not up to snuff, if you'll pardon the poor joke. Distractions of this nature do get in the way of progress. Finally allow me to note that the ingestion of large quantities of human feces usually results in a nasty case of hepatitis B, which is one reason I shy away from it as an element in my fantasies. Having said all this, I still think that this piece generates so much heat that it overwhelms most of my digs. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
XtremeInk
(Edit) (Nov 13, 2003)
- The proofing is an issue. It's possible that I screwed up and posted a copy that wasn't fully proofed. My bad.
As for the suffering - yes it's over the top. If I do another Sara story it'll be a bit less extreme - can't have the readers going numb after all :)
As far as the heb B well I have two things to say about that.
1) It's only a story. No normal human could endure the things that happened in this story.
2) There is a vaccine for Hep B.
Thanks for taking the time to review it. Crits are appreciated!
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Jacen
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Nov 13, 2003 |
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This guy is quite simply one of the best! I could go on and on, but just read his stories. (10/10)
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