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After the Garden Party Author: justin benedict
(Added on Nov 5, 2003) (This month 14266 readers) (Total 34960 readers)
nice teasing and denial story...

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Number of Ratings: 6
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Weighed Average (?): (8.5/10)
Average Rating: (9/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: Yoru (Edit) Rating: Feb 12, 2005
Very enjoyable, but the wife should have degraded her husband a little more physically, then it would have been perfect (8/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jun 19, 2004
Very Well Done (9/10)

Reviewer: rhmusic (Edit) Rating: Jan 28, 2004
Very, very enjoyable. You really get a feeling for how the wife enjoys her role, and that's a wonderful feeling. (9/10)

Reviewer: Kingcodez (Edit) Rating: Jan 15, 2004
Great Story, I sorta feel bad for the guy, but admiration also. (9/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2003
Quite good like most of your stuff (9/10)

Reviewer: Alex Bragi (Edit) Rating: Nov 6, 2003
I enjoyed this quirky little story of yours, I really did. You poor little bugger, you! Please, tell me this story is based on your real life situation and Ill have to up my score even higher.
Only paragraphs please! It just makes it so much easy to read, especially of a computer screen. I have a feeling that perhaps the odd formatting may not have been your fault, but try to get it rectified anyway. A couple of times the dialog was confusing simply because it should been on a fresh line. On the really super nit picky side, remember too, ellipses should only be use where a word or words are omitted. (8/10)

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