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The Wager
Author: The Outsider
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(Added on Nov 2, 2003)
(This month 18835 readers) (Total 45353 readers) |
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A friendly wager of two mothers placed brings heavy consequences. |
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Average (?):  (3/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 24, 2010 |
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If the story was written in English I might have understood what was written and perhaps enjoyed the story. However the spelling and grammar are so bad it does not make sense. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Nov 5, 2003 |
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Very poorly written (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
andibabe
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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You stole text from the story, "Becoming Cupcake," on http://www.mcstories.com. I will notify the author of this...it's not right. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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The story so far is gret, o hope you have cupcake in a variety of the leather and pvc outfits she saw, the more blackmal the mre humilation she suffers the better the story
keep up the great job so far (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirSteven(D)
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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Very poorly written :-( (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
Hornyreddevil
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Nov 3, 2003 |
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no offence is to be taken but is the author not speak english very well or was it run thru a cheap translater? (1/10)
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