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Sands of Fate
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Oct 17, 2003)
(This month 14820 readers) (Total 42053 readers) |
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First posted sometime back, this tale still reads like today's headlines, (that is, if one were to be totally twisted). |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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very enjoyable (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2009)
- Before real time, but no self-aggrandizement.
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| Reviewer:
Dick the Slaver
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Feb 4, 2006 |
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I enjoyed reading your fine story. I would like to see another story about Rina after she was sold. I did not find the story distracting. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 6, 2006)
- Dear D.T.S.,
Thank you for your Review. I am glad that you enjoyed the story of Rina, et al. And am inspired by your request for more of the same.
Faibhar
O.L. "Too late for sweets, too soon for flowers."
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| Reviewer:
Tim_Id
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Oct 29, 2003 |
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Ever changing view points is distracting. The reader has more emotional involvement if the point of view is that of the victim. This is about as sadistic as a scene can get, giving stimulants to enhance and prolong the pain. Except if the victim is made to watch her mutilation. Quite a horror story. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 29, 2003)
- Dear Tim Id,
Too bad about the "distracting" part. Just chalk it up to another convention. Thank you for the generous Review for the rest of the piece.
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| Reviewer:
e.e. norcod
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Oct 21, 2003 |
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As good as anything I have ever read. I am somewhat amazed that no one has reviewed it yet. I suspect that they are too intimidated my the quality of the story to say anything. I did catch two typo however! Congratulations on a great story. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2003)
- I blush at yor most generous Review. Glad you enjoyed the story, as that is most important.
As for the typo(s), sorry about that...I shall try my best not to let something similar happen in the future.
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