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Dianna
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Oct 11, 2003)
(This month 9513 readers) (Total 23853 readers) |
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Kinky Dianna and her BDSM adventures. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 20, 2009 |
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enjoyable (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2009)
- Nothing to like re: "The Accidental Surgeon"?
- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Jan 20, 2009)
- Inspired.
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| Reviewer:
Tim_Id
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Oct 29, 2003 |
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Dianna is my kind of woman. All that about cheerleader and bra size doesn't contribute to the story. More on the relationship with her partner might. This story could be developed into great D&S erotica. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 29, 2003)
- Dear Tim_Id,
Thank you for your fine Reviews. Sorry that the cheerleader/bra size did not appeal, but I am sure that you can also appreciate that this was just another way of describing physical attributes.
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Oct 18, 2003 |
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A '4'? Random capitalization brought you down from an '8', but I just can't see a '4' in here (or the reason for the personal attack). As you noted, not at all your usual style. In addition, I thought the 10k minimum was still in effect (since the story was accepted, that's hardly your fault). I do think an extra few hundred words transitioning from the middle to the end would not have been amiss, but this isn't bad. So, how did you do in the contest? The implication from your introduction was that the contest sort of disipated. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 18, 2003)
- Dear Curtis,
Firstly, thank you for your kind Review, and happy that you enjoyed the story. As for the '10K minimum', well, you have me there.
The other contest alluded to apparently is still very much a work in progress. Either that, or for reasons too unpleasant to even contemplate, they have ceased to email me anything further. Should that tact somehow reverse, if that really is what it is, I shall let you know.
Thank you again.
p.s. FYI: for a really drastic departure an entry into an earlier contest, I believe in the year 2002, was posted (these people do not have cash prizes as does bdsmlibrary.com)under the 2500 word category and is entitled "The Bra That Got Away".
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Oct 14, 2003 |
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Even considering the ground rules the author hints about, this one has very little to recommend it except that it is mercifully short. The writing is conceited and extremely florid, perhaps that is another ground rule I didn't take into consideration. As for the use of random capitalization, what can I say? (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 14, 2003)
- Not the "best" of Reviews, but I regardlessly do thank you for taking the time to compose your response.
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| Reviewer:
jbowler65
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Oct 13, 2003 |
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A very nice short story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2003)
- jbowler65 Thank you for your most generous Review and, most of all, glad you enjoyed the piece.
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