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The Scuba Trip
Author: Swing Trader
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(Added on Aug 16, 2003)
(This month 49999 readers) (Total 63729 readers) |
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Three spring breakers get more than they expected out of a scuba diving trip. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
leser
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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I liked this story very much. The idea is VERY interesting and i hope the author will eventually write more (much more!!). Some small errors are to be found, but proof reading should solve the problem. PLEASE write more stories. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 2, 2004 |
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it was enjoyable to read but i did not find anything extrodinary about it (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Spectre
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Aug 7, 2004 |
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An interesting story with a very unusual setting. I am looking forward to the next chapter. (8/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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A difficult story to rate. The author deserves about a nine for a very clever idea. But the story is marred (as such a short story (episode?) should not be) by many errors: "air peace out of Ashley's mouth and watched her face turn white with fear. I pulled of her goggles ..." just a little later : "I guess they thought they had one that arguement."
Two mistakes in each brief passage (piece, off; won, argument) -- and there were quite a few others. It looks as if there might be more to the story. I hope so -- it's a very clever idea. But take a little more time proof-reading it next time. Good luck!
(6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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Well done for coming up with an unusual angle for your first story. Very devious indeed! I would have liked the story even more if it were a little longer. Do you happen to have any idea what would be the outcome of this story? All kinds of possibilities present themselves.
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| Reviewer:
Lord Douche
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Aug 16, 2003 |
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You make Scuba Diving a whole lot more enjoyable. (9/10)
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