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Moira
Author: Ariana Myst
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(Added on Jul 24, 2003)
(This month 7658 readers) (Total 15919 readers) |
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A slave shamelessly disgraces her Master and is harshly punished. Only to at last come to truelly understand her place. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
le forgeron
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Jul 30, 2003 |
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The end just appears out of nowhere, changing the
relationship between Donas and Moria we have seen so far.
It's a bit strange... (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Jul 27, 2003 |
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I liked this a lot, even though it was rather tame by my depraved standards. ;-0 I particularly enjoyed the way in which the author described the first scene -- clothing, furnishings, etc. The female dialogue was a step up from the usual as well. Nice job. There were a couple of careless errors -- "marks and collar you bare" "Moira was frighten" etc, but all told a very nice read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Emily
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Jul 24, 2003 |
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This story simply didn't have enough bite for me. (6/10)
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