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A Strong and Continued Inclination Author: PenChant
(Added on Jun 20, 2003) (This month 63208 readers) (Total 96244 readers)
A father and experienced master takes on two new students; his daughter and her willful friend.

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Weighed Average (?): (7.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
Lowest Rating: (5/10)

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Reviewer: jip (Edit) Rating: Aug 22, 2006
Exiting story. A lot of movement. (9/10)

Reviewer: wildandi (Edit) Rating: May 7, 2005
Can't wait for more! (9/10)

Reviewer: Wyn (Edit) Rating: Feb 10, 2004
Interesting beginning. (7/10)

Reviewer: crickette (Edit) Rating: Dec 4, 2003
Pretty good story. It was short but not rushed. Would make a great first chapter. (7/10)

Reviewer: e.e. norcod (Edit) Rating: Sep 12, 2003
Good story, fair to middling writing skills, the comments of the other reviewers should be taken positively. I agree that the dialogue is a bit stilted, the desciptions stereotypical and the pace a bit too fast. But these can be remedied in further chapters. I lot the plot and the characters show promise. If things improve in the 3rd and subsequent downloads I will raise my rating. The author should definitely keep at it. For a first posting this is very well done! (7/10)

Reviewer: annasherwood (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2003
dialogue was a little stilted, and (a personal pet peeve:) anuses don't have natural lubrication...so, a good story, well written, but with some inaccuracies and lack of natural dialogue (6/10)

Reviewer: LadyLibra (Edit) Rating: Jun 24, 2003
I like the fact that we will see 2 types of training.... maybe teaching his daughter both roles F/f. (9/10)

Reviewer: DaveDom (Edit) Rating: Jun 21, 2003
Compared to other stories I got some excitement, but not the full pleasure it could have been. Keep working on the story line. (8/10)

Reviewer: Nitrofox (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
This was a decent story. It did move a little fast, but I really enjoyed what action there was. I hope for more additions to the story soon. (7/10)

Reviewer: tink (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
Very well written -- no noticeable grammar or spelling problems to knock me out of the moment.
And oh, what a moment it is! :) I'm looking forward to the continuing story of these two girls' training by their new Master -- one his daughter and the other, her friend. (9/10)

Reviewer: Hornyreddevil (Edit) Rating: Jun 20, 2003
love the story plot but i feel that it moves a little too quickly. not only that but it has some spots where it feels like the author just didnt try to hard (5/10)

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