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A weekend at the Cabin
Author: Baby Blues
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(Added on May 31, 2003)
(This month 59888 readers) (Total 73749 readers) |
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A woman goes to her cabin for the weekend only to find a stranger at the door that wants to take her for his submissive partner.. He is willing to do anything to break her will. And he does. |
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Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
vegasvixen99
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Dec 5, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the story very much (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
deepbluemm
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Apr 11, 2004 |
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Loved this story. I found it intelligent and realistic. I could imagine and relate to the the scenes described. Well done Baby Blues! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
qtkite
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Jul 18, 2003 |
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The major reason for the low score is the grammar and punctuation. While the story was fine, the grammar and punctuation made me have to struggle though it. You have talent but please spend the time to edit your writing and make it pleasing. A good book to look at is a writing guide to MLA style or any good college grammar book. Keep your head up and keep writing. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lady Blade
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May 31, 2003 |
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You really need to work on your grammar, punctuation, and content. This concept is not new, nor could I make it past the first 'very' long paragraph to find anything exciting about it. If you want to do a concept like this, please work on your writing skills first and edit this before re-posting it. I don't normally give a bad reveiw, but this one needs it. (2/10)
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