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Lesson Plan
Author: Kallie Thomas
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(Added on Dec 16, 2002)
(This month 14286 readers) (Total 33120 readers) |
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A pretty teacher is taught a harsh lesson in manners when the transient she insulted follows her to school. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 28, 2003 |
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Like the genral story, would have been nicer with an extention of nc and blackmail, but still a good read (8/10)
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CoffinNail
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Dec 29, 2002 |
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Not on a par with some of the author's other pieces, but certainly a fun read.
--CN (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
veru_skjava
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Dec 27, 2002 |
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I was very disappointed in this story! There was absolutely no erotica or "heat" in it what so ever. Also typographical error where Correine is Caroline.
Having enjoyed many of this authors other works, I have to hope this type of writing will not be repeated. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Kallie Thomas
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2002)
- Unfortunately, a more heavily edited version was submitted a few hours after this one, with a request that this one be discarded in favor of the new (which did not have the "Caroline" mistake). Sadly, the switch was not made. Your other complaint I really can't address, as obviously I disagree :)
Kallie
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 17, 2002 |
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This is a rather confusing story. The incentive to rape this teacher is not really explained. Also, getting into a school isn't that easy. Where I went to school we had aides at the main entrance, and everyone had to sign in. All in all, rather disbelievable. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
CoffinNail
(Edit) (Dec 29, 2002)
- The reader's ability to suspend disbelief really is the heart of fiction--if the reader is incapable, the writer may as well hang it up. And it's "unbelievable," not "disbelievable." Kills me when I see the barely literate slamming decent writers.
--CN
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