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The Art Of Escape
Author: Tyjord
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(Added on Dec 7, 2002)
(This month 70686 readers) (Total 92611 readers) |
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A young escape artist gets some unexpected help with his training from his girlfriend. Help he soon begins to regret. |
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| Reviewer:
cbtboyuk
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May 29, 2010 |
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Wow. this turns quickly from a vaguely humourous tale to and extremely vicious one - something you do a lot with your stories...love it love it love it...perhaps the next suld feature a troop of young ballet dancers and the horrors their dance mistress inflicts on them.... (10/10)
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tokyocatdepressed
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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One of the best story ever read! I'm italian, and my English is a mess, but the fate of Justin and the evil of Melissa are so clear and perfect to me. I think that you are a fan of Augustine (a cartoonist intrigued with F/m, enema and BDSM).
I'm never bored to read and to read, and to read...
God, I need a second part, I wish to know if Melissa come home with some friends, or with a videocamera...
There are so many possibilities to continue a GREAT STORY!
Thankyou Tyjord, you're a magician! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Thank you for the compliments and the great review. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
No plans for a second part at this time, but if one happened, I'm sure Melissa would indeed bring someone with her.
Thanks again!
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| Reviewer:
Ranai
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Jun 16, 2005 |
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Good concept, deliciously wicked, well described. The amount of information provided and information withheld works well. The bondage and squirming come across nicely erotic. Aaah, brings back those early days of ogling photographs of Harry Houdini! :) (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2005)
- Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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| Reviewer:
slave_george
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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Very good story!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Aug 13, 2004)
- Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Oct 9, 2003 |
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good story. Leaves you wondering what else his girlfriend has up her sleeve. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Glad you liked it. I was hoping this story would leave readers wondering about several things.
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| Reviewer:
slvWriting
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Oct 8, 2003 |
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I like escape artists and the combination with BDSM was very well employed. I would have liked more active involvement from the girlfriend rather than her just leaving him on his own (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Thanks for reading and reviewing my story. I'm curious as to what type of "active involvement" you would have liked to see. I tried to use BDSM themes without making it a story about BDSM. Was the girlfriend intending for this to become a sexual thing, or was she just making a point? That's up to you, the reader.
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| Reviewer:
cadderly
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Mar 25, 2003 |
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nice story. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Oct 9, 2003)
- Thanks!
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| Reviewer:
snowman
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Jan 2, 2003 |
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The story is brilliant, believable, well crafted, and provides an excellent context for one to fantasize-which is why I believe people read this stuff in the first place. I was sorry to see it end. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Jan 3, 2003)
- Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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| Reviewer:
robert216
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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I think the setup is great, and the situation well presented. I would have enjoyed the story better if the extreme aspects were toned down a bit to make it survivable. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2002)
- Thanks for taking the time to review the story. While I did make the ordeal a bit over the top and extreme, I never meant for it to be final. In the story, the situation is survivable.
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T38tara
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Dec 7, 2002 |
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was a surprise to read, nice ending.
Wonder if he ever get free tough
Tara (8/10)
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- Replied by:
tyjord
(Edit) (Dec 10, 2002)
- Thanks for the comments!
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