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Caliente Alto
Author: Faibhar
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(Added on Dec 7, 2002)
(This month 10167 readers) (Total 27183 readers) |
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An amateur film crew meets with more than they first planned at a desert location. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 17, 2006 |
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the story was ok, just to much snuff in genenral to deal with preffr not to read it in stories (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 20, 2006)
- Dear mkemse,
Thank you for your Review. Too bad the attempted spoofiness did not communicate, but thanks regardless for taking the time to read a little and then post a review.
For those other than yourself, 'offended' by the subject of snuff as they have stated in the Forum, a simple reminder that at the opening page of this site there is a message in caps that reads, "ALL STORIES POSTED ARE FICTIONAL FANTASIES!".
Hope that your next read is more to your liking.
F.
- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Feb 20, 2006)
- Dear mkemse,
Thank you for your Review. Too bad the attempted spoofiness did not communicate, but thanks regardless for taking the time to read a little and then post a review.
For those other than yourself, 'offended' by the subject of snuff as they have stated in the Forum, a simple reminder that at the opening page of this site there is a message in caps that reads, "ALL STORIES POSTED ARE FICTIONAL FANTASIES!".
Hope that your next read is more to your liking.
F.
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Dec 8, 2002 |
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This story was a bit weird. It was written well, though I didn't like the content as much. Also, why didn't the scorpions attack the girls? And why where they filming out in the middle of nowhere? Also, the girls didn't really have to die at the end. The lawyer was an asshole as well. More detail could be added, definitely. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Faibhar
(Edit) (Dec 9, 2002)
- Thank you for your review. As per some of your questions, it was left to the reader's fertile imagination and sense of logic that the girls would get bit, the far-off locale was deliberate so as not to attract too much attention, and the terminal use of the girls was meant to be implied by their rough handling.
Further details would have slowed the pace even more of this definitely over-the-top take on an actual plot gleaned from some cyber group.
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