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Amanda's High School Lover
Author: Angelgirl
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(Added on Nov 14, 2002)
(This month 17510 readers) (Total 53732 readers) |
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Amanda falls head over heels for a young guy at school. She has no idea what's in store for her. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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great story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (May 1, 2005)
- La Toya,,,,, I would write stories just for you.
Love
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 19, 2004 |
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GREAT!!!!!!!!!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Nov 30, 2004)
- Thank you so much Master mkemse. You are a man of few words; but I'm smiling all over.
Love
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
greggolf15
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Oct 10, 2003 |
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Good job--loved it! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Oct 1, 2004)
- Thank you greggolf15. I'm so happy you liked it; and I'm sorry it took me so long to reply.
Thank you again
Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
agp_millie
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Dec 14, 2002 |
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fascinating, but quite horrible (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Nov 17, 2002 |
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Excellent intensity, and some imaginative scenes -- both legs out the car window was new to me. The writing was only fair, though, and I didn't care for the heroine's references to her experiences at ten. Another thing -- I like the national pastime (sexual violence) as much as the next guy, but personally I could have done without the Louisville Sluggers. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Nov 20, 2002)
Sorry boccaccio,
These stories are my first attempt at writing. They are based loosely on true events in mine and my sisters lives. If i deside to write more they will be fiction; and like you I hope they will be less "SLUGGER"
Love Angelgirl
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| Reviewer:
Detrusor
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Nov 15, 2002 |
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Very extreme rape and well written. I only miss longer descriptions of the scenes (too short for my likes) and a bit more of variety from one scene to another. But I liked it a lot, is very easy to read and keeps your attention very well. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
angelgirl
(Edit) (Nov 20, 2002)
Thank you Detrusor
I'ts nice to know you liked my story. You have hit my weakness right on the nail.I need to learn to be more descriptive and a little less violent.
I hate to plug other writers but have you read the stories by Heather? You might like her.
Thanks again for the kind words.
Love Angelgirl
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