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Two for Torment
Author: pamela
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(Added on Oct 13, 2002)
(This month 327861 readers) (Total 434519 readers) |
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Female reporter is captured and punished for exposing a corrupt city council, and a brother enslaves his sister with the help of a friend. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dr. White
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Mar 27, 2011 |
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I liked this story very much. I have liked everything I have read from Pamela and look forward to reading more. I like the structure, both the back and forth chapters and the story being broken up into many smaller chapters. A long story is hard to read in one long gasp and this makes it much easier to digest. Keep up the excellent work. (10/10)
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ramses
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Nov 9, 2008 |
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Just excellent. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 4, 2007 |
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excellent story.
The story flow smoothly throughout.
The heroine female reporter is appealing while the distraction of a 2nd supporting female character make the reader miss the lead character more.
I have no problems with the short chapters. Most of the story here are way too long and it's hard to read everything. Once you start to scan reading, skipping many lines, you might lose the plot and you gave up on the story. The paragraphs are also short - easy to read again. For me, it is very hard to read though 20+ lines of a single paragraph like some stories here.
The formatting of the story was a plus for me.
The end also see the heroine trying to plot her payback which was a welcome change from the usual "turn into mindless slave ending"
(10/10)
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tragedy3
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Feb 15, 2006 |
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well written, fast-paced and exciting. i loved it. will there be more? i truly hope so. thanks for a very satisfying read. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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my only issue is that most of the chapers were to short (9/10)
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rcb
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Feb 28, 2003 |
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Good story lines,holds together throughout. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Aniga
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Jan 23, 2003 |
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Ranks among the five best stories I've read and got tremendously aroused by. (And this includes Whiteshadow, RPP, etc). Just the right level of cruelty and mind control / humiliation (and a little bit extra). I too, read it earlier on Leviticus' site. (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Oct 16, 2002 |
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I first read this story some years ago, and it is one of the finest stories of its type that I have ever come across; a worthy model for all those writers who are seeking to put a little extra zip in their stories. I don't mean the zip of nastiness or cruelty -- although there is that in abundance -- but the author's attention to detail and character. The villains are inspired, and the heroines most appealing.<br>One caveat -- when I encountered this story before, it was attributed to a "Brown Dragon" who may or may not be the 'Pamela' who has posted it here. If so, I apologize for raising the issue; but if not, it is only fair to extend credit to whom it is due (10/10)
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- Replied by:
pamela
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2002)
- Yes, it's me. I have used the pseudonym "Brown Dragon" in the past, for a few of my stories that were posted on other sites. I no longer use it, and I hope eventually to post all my stories here as pamela. Thanks for the nice words.
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boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Oct 20, 2002)
- I am happy to withdraw my earlier suggestion that the story might not be Pamela's. And reiterate my earlier comments that it is one of the best-written stories I have ever read at the 'heavy' end of the BDSM spectrum.
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