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Tia
Author: dog girl trainer
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(Added on Sep 12, 2002)
(This month 51499 readers) (Total 70204 readers) |
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After Tia had read the note from her Mr. Shane, her landlord, she sat on the bed and cried. Just how was she going to find the rent money she owed? |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
gojack10
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Apr 9, 2004 |
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I rated it 9, simply because if the writer can add in a little more detail to make Tia a complete character, then he will be writing a good story. So it gets an extra point or two for potential. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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I realy enjoyed the whole story, i wish it was longer and i hope you offer more of the same in the near future (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Sep 30, 2003 |
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It was good. I wish it had been longer. (7/10)
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Nitrofox
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Dec 18, 2002 |
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I agree that the story line is familiar, but I really like the story line. I also would like to see a continuation. I like the innocence of Tia in the story, but I agree that the conversations were a bit "dry". I look forward to more work on this. (7/10)
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RubbrSpatula
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Sep 13, 2002 |
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This is not exactly a breath of fresh air, but it's not a pretentious and overly-complicated series of events. It's believable. I think the dialogue was a little dry and clinical. Also, I'd like to see a continuation, and see more than just a catlog of the different positions and humiliations Tia can receive; I want to see her and believe she;'s in this situation. And I want a resolution (not necessarily a happy ending).
I think... this is the first draft of one of the better stories I've read all year. (8/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Sep 13, 2002 |
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Fairly well written, but the story line is awfully familiar. (7/10)
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