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Communication Skills
Author: subtle
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(Added on Aug 15, 2002)
(This month 51134 readers) (Total 67863 readers) |
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Good communication is so important between a Dom and sub, don't you think? This Dom apparently thought so, and his sub's bruises will attest to it. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
zenoida
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Nov 6, 2014 |
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This was a great start to a story! I love the detailed why the Dom guides his sub through it. Very mild though. Sequel please (10/10)
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robbermagnet
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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Very erotic and well written. I want to see more of these two characters, and it looks like I can! (9/10)
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chksng19
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Dec 27, 2004 |
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The purpose of a short-short is to snag the reader and force them to look deep into one facet of life. This does that, and very well.
The purpose of an erotic story is to stimulate. This does that too, and also well.
It also requests the reader to demand more.
Batting 1.000. (9/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Apr 12, 2004 |
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Not too bad a story for a Seattle cab driver to be writing between fares. (7/10)
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Warrior
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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I usually don't read M/f, but I had heard this piece was well written. I thoroughly enjoy reading stories with a fine control over the English language; this is one of them.
The dialogue was especially well done and reminded me of a philosophical discussion. (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Good beginning. Now I'll read the next part. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Dec 5, 2003 |
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awwwwwwww it's December 2003...
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I want to read some more of what follows.
(10/10)
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l_anguissette
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May 18, 2003 |
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Noooooooooooooo! You CAN'T leave me hanging like this! Please, please, PLEASE write more of these two....a long, long, long serial....please?
-anguissette (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
justina
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Dec 26, 2002 |
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Well written from the submissive's point of view; I strongly relate to her, which makes it very interesting to me and am now going to read some more of the continuing story! (9/10)
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Marcus
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Aug 18, 2002 |
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Good writing. Alas, it is currently too short for me to rate it any higher at the moment. Hope it continues. (8/10)
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LadyLibra
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Aug 17, 2002 |
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I will be rembering this story next time(more like 80% of my latte visits) Im ordering a latte!!
I would like to see/read from his point of view. Subtle's Story's are in my top 10 list (10/10)
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veru_skjava
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Aug 16, 2002 |
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mmmmm excellent, indeed I can very well feel her feelings.
This sounds like the beginning of a fantastic story, i can't wait to read more. (9/10)
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Pooka
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Aug 15, 2002 |
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I adore subtle stories and the slow building of sexual tension between partners, especially when it is well written! The dialogue and descriptions are to the point, I could very well imagine myself in her shoes.
I'm looking forward to more!
I also like that the female lead is strong and realistic, her thoughts about what is going on are exciting and make me remember my own days of seduction by a powerful man. *grin* (9/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Aug 15, 2002 |
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A promising beginning to what looks like a good story. Well-written. I seem to have this over-powering urge to hail a taxi... (8/10)
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