|
|
|
|
|
The Fall of 19_
Author: Lindsay Zara
|
| |
(Added on Aug 6, 2002)
(This month 56883 readers) (Total 69698 readers) |
| |
A young husband and wife, married for a little while and bored with their mundane lives and with each other, attend a party and there meet a handsome, powerful, magnetic man. Both become extremely aroused by the man, and their mutual involvement with him begins this night, an involvement which will change both of their lives forever, and take them to depths of sexual submission neither had previously imagined. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 4 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
25% |
0% |
50% |
25% |
0% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (8/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (5/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jul 20, 2008 |
| |
nice job well written (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
MasterRodsPet
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Jan 25, 2005 |
| |
I totally enjoyed the story and hope that you continue on with it. (8/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
jmfm1
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 14, 2002 |
| |
You must write some more (7/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
hyphen666
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Aug 6, 2002 |
| |
The only type of erotic story more overworked than the formal master/slave is incest. However in the case of incest there are many more combinations and permutations, allowing better opportunities for character development, plot and interaction. I hate to break the news, but there is an on-going story at this site that is much akin to what the author purports to have written. By comparing what this author has submitted to the effort delivered by her competitor for my attention, I must conclude that this effort should be rated much lower than the referenced story. By god I have developed a new way to do a review by the numbers, and I wasn't even trying! As in my previous reviews this rating has very little or nothing to do with "has some promise, the author could improve it." (5/10)
|
|
|
About 