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The New Girl
Author: BDSM_Tourguide
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(Added on Jul 15, 2002)
(This month 24731 readers) (Total 57669 readers) |
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Marie has come to John to learn to be a submissive. Follow along and see how John and his submissive, honey, teach Marie to appreciate being submissive and to give herself completely to the lifestyle. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Mar 3, 2005 |
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the rating saysy it all, you are always great, that simple
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Nov 29, 2002 |
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What can I say. I liked it, and I look forward to the next rendition. Nice writing too. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
LadyLibra
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Sep 4, 2002 |
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9+<10- I went with the higher,it would be great to see what limits were listed on the second page of the contract;with the right of the author to modify at any time. I noticed that if you take parts of the subs name and think of all the ways it can be used you will come to realize its a perfect name!! (just learned how to do the offline review, give me back the DOS days...) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jen
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Aug 29, 2002 |
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A very well written story... obviously a combination of good writing skills and a twisted mind. Nice. :) Hmmm... makes me want "John and honey's" number. heh I do, though, have to agree with the earlier comment that the name assigned to Marie was a bit distasteful. But that's just my personal opinion. :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Aug 4, 2002 |
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This score is perhaps unfairly low. I think "humiliation" should be prominently mentioned in the codes; in my view that is the essence of the story -- beginning with the name (which I found distasteful) that John assigned to the star character. Not badly written, but not to my taste. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Aug 4, 2002)
- No problem. I realize not everyone's fantasies are to each other's likings. What was the old saying? You can please some of the people all of the time and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot please all of the people all of the time.
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| Reviewer:
drake7
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Aug 3, 2002 |
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Well written and realistic. You might want to add watersports to the description, I don't think it was included there. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Aug 3, 2002)
- I did when I updated it, but the webmaster doesn't add to the codes once you selected them, even when you update them later. Sorry if it caused any inconvenience.
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| Reviewer:
Jacker
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Jul 18, 2002 |
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Waiting zealously for part 2. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
gracilleevigtøs
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Jul 17, 2002 |
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What a bedtime story - please keep writing. :-) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
kitkat113
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Jul 17, 2002 |
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Lucky Marie! Where do i sign up! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
syndie
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Jul 16, 2002 |
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Can't wait for Day 2 *s* (10/10)
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