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Completely
Author: Peachz
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(Added on Aug 14, 2016)
(This month 70564 readers) (Total 70564 readers) |
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A short story about a single date between a D/s couple. He is a real gentleman, the kind that pulls out chairs, carries bags, and opens doors for a lady. He wines and dines her, treats her like a queen. But when it comes to sex, she is his completely, his toy, his play thing, his sex slave, his whore, and he uses her liberally for his pleasure. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Misschief
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Nov 29, 2016 |
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idealistically male, innuendos like the enormity of cock size and lavish details about the ferociousness of the fucking "im gonna fuck you so hard your momma feels it" (paraphrased, forgive me if not a direct quote) lead me to believe that a male wrote the story.. which is not a negative thing.. all and all, i enjoyed the power exchange.. i do not believe that i would have included S/m in the story codes, but i guess there was a bit of hair pulling..
total power exchange is what does it for me and this story plays with that theme lovingly, which i enjoyed.. its nice to read a story now and again where the sub is treasured for the gift of herself that she bestows upon her owner, rather than the standard use and discard plot all too common, here..
maybe a bit longer.. maybe include the hot chick from the club and degrade her a bit, make her eat out the sub and get her head shoved into the toilet? i think the subbie in this story deserved a pat on the head for being such a good girl! (8/10)
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