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The Pain Club
Author: Rick
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(Added on Jun 18, 2002)
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This is to be a long on-going tale of sex pain and heavy torture. Sandy is a pain slut or so she thinks she is. Go with her from age 18 to age 25 as she learns what real pain and torture is. Will she still love it? |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Feb 20, 2006 |
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mixed feelings about this story... (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 1, 2004 |
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i wa really disapointed, with the codes you used, it really should have been NC, but all ican do is read it, and comment, not write it (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
ladys_maid
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May 10, 2003 |
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I really do hope that, contrary to the author's summary, this is not going to be "a long on-going tale". Never mind the poor girl suffering pain and torture - what about the readers of this story? They have way more of my sympathy. Sorry, but it is dreadful. (1/10)
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sirsgirl
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Jun 24, 2002 |
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the spelling.....and speech structure....... it deters from the story considerably......... it could have been good had spell check been implemented............ why not?????? (4/10)
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Lady Lance
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Jun 22, 2002 |
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When I read porn, I don't expect great lit (after all, that's not the point). What I *do* expect is for the author to have a grasp on the rudiments on the English language, and for the authors to have done a basic spell check on a story before posting.
From the looks of this story, however, it is clear that the author has neither. There are three word sentences, lines that end in "said" but no reference to who, and mistakes like "grate" for "great"
Is the story any good? I honestly couldn't tell you, the grammatical and spelling errors are so horrid that reading this fic is a chore and there is no way I could ever got hot from it.
hypehen666 was right: don't insult your readers, it won't win you any kudos. (1/10)
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kaleun76
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Jun 20, 2002 |
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The story is good, original and promising, however the spelling and gramatical errors are distracting, more so at the begining of the story.
May I suggest a speel check? The story itself is good, and I would hate to see the author disapointed by something that is relatively easy to fix. (5/10)
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Powerone
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Jun 20, 2002 |
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I have to agree with hypehen666. Give the readers some respect. Don't insult their intelligence with lousy punctuation, grammer and terrible spelling. (2/10)
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lord_odie
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Jun 18, 2002 |
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Ok, I agree that the grammer is not all that great, but the story itself is suficiently demented enought to hold my attention thru it all. Content over context. (9/10)
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hyphen666
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Jun 18, 2002 |
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Not another author who thinks that his lack of punctuation, knowledge of grammar and horrible spelling will be ignored by most readers. Couple this with an unbelievable set of events right from the onset leads me to conclude that I have better things to do with my time, such as rearrange my sock drawer and pay my back taxes. This one really sucks! (1/10)
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