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Don\'t be too attractive.....

Part 1

WARNING: Please read no further if tales of sexual torture are likely to offend you.

DISCLAIMER: Pleas accept this story and the characters within as totally fictional. 



Preface:


I could name a Eastern European city (or mid European depending on your definition) but wont because the inhabitants will be up in arms. The time 2004 just a few years ago and as far as I know the retreat is still functioning. How do I know the story? I live as wife and wife with one of the participants……….


Chapter One:


The Mother Superior smiled warmly and laughed gently and said We have all ages here from your daughters age - which is seventeen I think - through to aged crones like me 45 next birthday and my health is in Gods hands now


Lady Agure relaxed and allowed herself a smile because Mother Superior was  not aged or infirm in fact she was beautiful and obviously caring.


If God had allowed I would have joined an order like this myself at my daughters age. Lady Agure said. Beyond these walls are very rough people. she added thinking with distaste of her occasionally very violent, dull and unclean husband now lying in his grave 200 mile away .


But she was thankful nonetheless for the fortune he made and left to her so abruptly. 


Now if her daughter could be settled permanently into a happy but cloistered situation then she could travel and attend soirees with interesting women and occasionally be with males who were exceptionally charming, talented and did not mind the odd bite during lovemaking. Or she could find God also but that wasnt likely.


Well said Mother Superior the call to God is not limited to the young older women have entered into the eternal marriage to Christ after being bereaved and because they  have felt the call to be more holy. And some just attend retreats like this occasionally to refresh and renew themselves for the fray on the outside we have some delightful people and some interesting activities here for visitors who can afford to support us


Nevertheless moving to the matter at hand she added I take is you are committed to your daughter becoming a novitiate at this retreat and later to take her eternal vows of chastity and obedience?


Yes I am said Lady Agure who, warmed by the atmosphere of care and beauty, would have moved in herself tomorrow given a chance.


You appreciate- said Mother Superior that your daughter will pass from public view and except for occasional organized visits from you will see no one else except her sisters and support in the Lords work. She will never be close to men  except for receiving the sacraments and occasional visits from a priest. Further you will be required to provide 26000 US dollars a year as maintenance for her wellbeing as we survive by such payments and with a little help from the Church .


“I agree willingly smiled Lady Agure and I only wish I could enfold myself into the femininity and security here.  She spoke sincerely as she saw her action as protection against the coarse world for her daughter. And 26k dollars was not going to dent her ten million a year income.


Mother Superior then turned to Mekis. Welcome youngest member the Senior Sister here Sister Brec will take you to your place of relaxation and care. My name is Alesis but you refer to me as Mother normally.


With a gentle smile Sister Brec moved to take the young girl away holding her arm gently.


Thank you Lady Agure Mother said I hope you will return periodically and perhaps stay for short periods in return for your worldly support and do not worry about Mekis she is not far away ever because our flock never leaves the confines of this holy retreat except for their funeral.


As they parted and the door closed Alesis licked her lips quickly and felt almost dizzy at the prospect of training such a beautiful young thing with the help of her long term partner Sister Brec.


Lady Agure for her part felt a lovely sense of anticipation at the chance to stay there some time - the inmates appeared plain but sweet and innocent Lady Agure supposed it would be fun to interact with them and see if they were actually as chaste as they said.. And really she must find out what church the retreat belonged to she needed to convert immediately. But meantime she was booked for a fashion exposition in Paris and later a flight to New York with her most modish girlfriends..


Chapter Two:


Sister Brec deftly lead Mekis along quiet corridors and past a chapel where nuns could be seen quietly praying.


As she moved she talked quietly and reassuringly to Mekis and held the youngsters hand so she would not feel too frightened.


I suppose you wonder what this life will involve. The sister murmured  It is true that there is obedience, poverty and chastity well at least hardly any men she said with  some definiteness but there are one or two men - some of our talented leaders are holy it is true but they are also rogues who enjoy a laugh and more when they have had a wine or two.


However I can  assure you that this secure place is for the gentler gender to pray and interact in. You will never feel threatened by males here in fact they can be scared of us.


Mekis allowed herself a little smile she would really enjoy scaring some of the bullies she had met at school.



We will disassemble you discard the in error portions of your personality   and replace the intractable personality you now hold with the compliant obedient one you will have. Then you will be able to help others who enter here to experience the joy of being free of the world.


Oh said Mekis faintly not understanding really but comforted by the programs ordinariness.


Sister Brec did not understand the program either but it did not matter its function was simply to keep those outside the institute happy with its work


In the morning said Sister Brec you will return to Mother Superiors office from your cell without speaking when you hear the chants come wearing just the smock that is hanging on the door of this room where you will sleep. Wait quietly there until she returns from devotions. Goodnight Mekis. I suppose you are travel weary and sore so I hope you sleep well. You have a little while to make yourself clean and pretty and sweetly perfumed. We are very plain during the day but a little beauty at night and in front of the Mother Superior is acceptable.


Chapter Three.


Mekis slept well in the quiet pervading silence that was broken by early morning singing that lifted to the sky and hopefully was heard by God. She rose, toileted and put on her smock and padded barefoot along the smooth stones of the cloisters obviously everybody was at devotions for she saw nobody and when  she arrived at the Mother Superiors quarters she went into the day room as she had been directed to last night. She shut the door from the unattended office and sat on the hard bench to wait for Mother Superior.


The Mother Superiors quarters seemed  to comprise the office used yesterday and a the  plain small day room she was now waiting in with ablution facilities attached at the back. To the other side was a small sleeping quarters room only slightly larger than the cell in which she had spent the night.


Mekis waited for only a short time and then Mother Superior returned in good spirits. Ah Mekis glad you are here just come with me to wash your face it has a little dirt from yesterday on it. Mother Superior gestured with her arm and Mekis obediently went forward looking over her shoulder to see where she was expected to go. Mother Superior shut the door to the bathroom gently and Mekis walked to the washbasin. When  she neared the shower she felt herself grasped roughly and pushed into the shower and further because the back wall swung smoothly without pressure on its axis to reveal a room beyond. Before Mekis had time to catch her breath or even wonder what was happening she was suddenly in a room with the Mother Superior behind her and magically Sister Brec behind the Mother. Without any drama or words one took each arm and steered her to the wall where two leather armbands were attached in a single quick fix action. Within 10 seconds each wrist was held up against the wall….


The effect of this on Mekis was immediate she screamed as loudly as possible.


The effect on Mother Superior was unexpected - she simply licked her lips quietly and hungrily as if she was tasting cream and said Oh please do scream my dear it courses through me so beautifully over the next week or so I hope to hear you do that many times.


What a beautiful plaything you are my dear - you will interact nicely with this older one we have had here for a day or two now Mekis meet Rono a young lady from the East hasnt she got a beautiful body ? isnt it a shame that makes her full of sin and she like you will not survive because her beauty is too great and we are so jealous and attracted to beautiful figures Brec and I..'


Sister Brec said I am warm already at the thought of Mekis dancing for us.


You are sure only you and  I have seen Mekis? said Alesis to Brec


Absolutely said Brec ‘– but if by mischance someone else saw her this will no doubt be spoken of at lunch and we can then assure the sisters that the girl could only handle one night and had to go home.


Alesis gave a silent prayer of thanks for her brainwave to remodel the old building in such a way that this hidden room could exist. It had required six different tradesmen each doing a small portion of the work and variously they supposed they were building a library, a mop cupboard, a retreat for meditation, a private chapel and simply an extension to her quarters. The shower was fitted at a different time by different tradesmen who knew nothing of the existence of the door. A days gentle cutting through the shower liner gave an exquisitely hidden hideaway.


Please help me whimpered Mekis. Rono attached in similar way to Mekis but on the opposite wall could not answer because her mouth was  fixed open by a large ring  but Alesis moved quickly across to her and said Certainly


In 30 seconds Alesis disrobed and clad just in panties with her breasts already showing some signs excitement  moved to her.


Now give me a kiss you delicious thing As she moved forward to kiss the girl her hand darted down the smock and her strong fingers grasped the girls nipple and squeezed it so hard that Mekis jumped in pain. Alesis simply breathed more warmly and wetly on her face Oh that is so beautiful I do love to hear and feel that and over the next while you are going sing a lot of that music and do a lot of that dancing.


Dont you like having a companion Rono? Now you can watch each other titillating Brec and I.


Without real apparent effort Alice redonned her habit  and was transformed from a lusty voluptuous woman in her prime to an aging pious Mother Superior.


Now she said cheerily to Brec lets have a morning break, then do some work and we may consider those other applicants for interview


We will bring you both lunch later Mekis and toiletries and anything else you need during the day it is our service to you because we wish you to be kept in  pristine condition for as long as possible after all we really want to enjoy you. By the way feel free to scream as much as you like when we are here  the walls are two foot thick and that door is nine inches of finely balanced concrete and the walls, floor, ceiling and door are lined with 150mm of foam which is then clad with sound absorbent board whew the end of the world could happen in here and nobody outside would know.. Since I love hurting women dear Mekis and since I particularly like screaming that seems to go with it for some reason my bowels turn to water when I hear that and Brec has to calm me unless she is excited also - please feel free to do as much as you like while we are here.  I can assure you though that although you will not be heard beyond these walls but I will warm to fire as I listen.


When we are not here both you and Rono will be ring gagged as Rono is now . We dont want you comparing notes too carefully. Not that that is really possible with our cctv monitor that we can watch you with anytime. Incidentally if we leave you two in agonizing positions that will be so Brec and I can watch you periodically and enjoy your struggles surreptitiously while we carry out our usual duties outside,


Anyway make whatever acquaintance you can with each other because you will be soon be competing to stay alive a little longer that the other. These contests so entertain us. Oh heavens wont that be interesting especially when the winner has to slowly torture the loser    such fun to watch. And of course we video all your struggles and games so we have something to watch on the cold nights when nobody here and we are just Mother Superior and Senior Sister. The hypocrisy of that alone can give me an orgasm


Oh my dear Alesis said perspiration suddenly appearing on her brow  I really need to hear you scream for your life right now while I lose myself in your lovely body.


Without effort she stepped over to Mekis and lifted her smock - grasped both nipples as hard as she could and twisted them as hard as she could with a lost ecstatic look on her face. Mekis screamed in agony and Alesis jerked and gasped and then finally relaxed and suddenly let go Mekiss breasts. Smiling she said I am  sorry my dear but having you helpless can just do things to me…..


You can rest now but I will be feeling like fun again tonight after devotions. In fact if I do not have this sort of invigoration I do not sleep that well…. Tonight you will be both be slavering I think as we have some fun with the training collars oh God that thought is so delicious .







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