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Avatar, Book 1: Establishment

Part 1

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Part 1

 	"Beautiful, isn't she?"

	Ken almost jumped out of his skin, all thoughts of the teen he'd just
been eyeing jolted from his head.

	"Jesus!"  he said as his head whipped around, "Where the hell..."  That
was as far as he got - he was  simply too stunned to speak further.  Too many
things converged on his brain at once.

	First and foremost was the woman herself.  Visually, she was the most
perfect woman that he'd ever laid  eyes on.  Her face was delicate, sensuous,
her eyes the purest green and her hair the most beautiful shade of  copper
imaginable.  Since she was sitting across from him, at his table, he could only
see her upper body.  It was  absolutely perfect.  Her breasts were not large,
but looked quite full.  Her nipples easily seen through the thin, elegant tank
top she wore.  Her skin was pale, but not a gross white.   Also bombarding his
sensations was her perfume.  Ken's rapidly clouding brain was unable to describe
it, other than to compare it to the most perfect sex he'd ever had.  Slightly
musky, slightly spicy, clean and completely natural.  Her voice too, was almost
heart stopping.  A bit husky, promising any delight one could wish for, while at
the same time seeming almost innocent of any sexual knowledge.

	Far, far in the back of his brain was a small voice wondering where she
had come from, what she was  doing at his table, and just how the hell she'd
gotten this close and been able to sit down with out him noticing  her.

	She smiled, and Ken felt his world starting to fade.  "What you really
mean,"  came that incredible voice  again, " was how did I get to your table
with out you seeing me, yes?"

	Suddenly, everything snapped back to normal.  Ken could breath again,
and, aside from a very large,  almost painfully erect penis, he felt just as
he'd been before she sat down.  She was still the most beautiful  woman he'd
ever seen, but not nearly as overwhelming.

	His heart beat returning to something resembling normal he said, "Uh,
yeah.  I guess I wasn't paying  attention.  Did you need to sit here?"

	Ken looked around the food court.  It was pretty full, but there were
lot's of other places she could have  sat.

	"It isn't where I came from but why I'm here that you should wonder
about."  Her voice wasn't as  overwhelming as before, but it was still warm,
welcoming and incredibly sexy.

	"I see,"  said Ken, trying to shift to ease position of his still hard
cock.  He was nervous now, aroused  and somewhat annoyed.  One of the reasons
that he liked to come to the mall for lunch was to watch women.   Ken absolutely
loved to watch women.  He didn't leer at them, or approach them and they rarely
caught him  staring at them.  Lunch here was a break from his very unpleasant
job.  Since he was actually pretty much a  loner, it was really one of the more
bright spots in his life.

	It wasn't that he had no friends.  He had plenty of them to pal around
with.  He'd had several girlfriends  in his past as he was neither socially
inept nor unattractive.  But he'd never found one that he'd wanted to stay  with
for a long time.  He never cheated, but every woman he dated had noted, and
mostly disapproved of, his  very roving eye and he enjoyed looking at women too
much to stop.  

	The age of said woman didn't matter - with in limits of course.  If they
were physically pleasing to look  upon, Ken would find himself wondering what
they were like in bed.  What sexual acts they'd tried or would  like to try. 
What things they would admit to a lover that they enjoyed - what secret
fantasies they had.  If they  were very young - twelve or thirteen, he would
wonder if they'd had their first orgasm yet, what sexual  experiences they'd had
or wanted to have.  With older women he wondered what they'd done to please a
lover,  or what their lovers had done to please them.   What fantasies they'd
lived out and what ones they longed for but  felt they could never have.

	"So,"  he continued, "why did you sit here."

	"Because I would like to offer you a deal.  I believe that we can help
each other."

	Ken was now very suspicious.  Strangers offering deals were usually con
artists.  A 'deal' was more  often a euphemism for 'just give me your money'.

	"What sort of 'deal'?"

	"You are suspicious." A look of sadness shown for an instant in those
startling eyes.  It was gone almost  before he registered it. "I know what you
were doing when I arrived.  The beautiful girl you were admiring, you  were
wondering if she'd ever had an orgasm."

	That was, in fact exactly what he'd been wondering.  The sexual
attractiveness of the woman had  returned and he was unable to look away from
her as she continued.

	"Yes, she has had many. She is thirteen and has been having them since
she was ten.  One night, after  her parents thought she was asleep, she snuck
out of her bedroom.  Her parents were watching a pornographic  movie and the
woman on the TV screen was masturbating and obviously enjoying it.  From her
hidden position,  she could see her mother with her legs spread wide being
orally pleasured by her father.  Her pussy began to  swell and when she heard
her mother groaning like the woman on the screen her small nipples began to
ache.   The woman on the screen orgasmed in a loud voice and her mother was not
far behind.  Melissa - that is the  girl's name - snuck upstairs.  She removed
her pajama bottoms and tried to repeat what she'd seen the woman on  the screen
doing.  She pulled her small nipples and rubbed her slick sex feeling the
pleasure spread in her body.   She achieved orgasm not long after.

	"Melissa is a very sexual person.  She is also very frustrated. Because
she is so young she is sometimes  scared of sex and the pleasure it brings. 
This does not stop her from masturbating daily."

	During this recitation, Ken had been mesmerized by those deep green
eyes.  It was almost as if he could  actually see the scene that she'd been
describing, almost as if he'd been there himself, watching the preteen  pleasure
herself for the first time.  His cock was throbbing with pleasure and unreleased
sexual tension.  He  could feel the precum soaking into his underwear.  When she
stopped speaking, it took a moment for him to get  himself back under control.

	"You tell a good story.  There's no way you could know that."

	"Shall I call her over?"  asked the woman with a wide smile.  "I can
have her describe it herself."

	Ken had panicked visions of police arresting them both for child
molestation, and the girl screaming for  her mother.

	Again, there was that flash of sadness in her eyes.  She sighed.  "Your
people are so... strange.  You  deny your own sexuality, yet use it for
currency.  You deny sexuality to those who are below some artificially  created
age, yet exploit them in secret, subtle ways while longing for the youth that
they have and you do not."

	Ken looked at her.  He had to admit that he'd often thought the same
things himself - not that it would be  anything but a jail term to outwardly
express those feelings.

	"I can see that a demonstration is the only thing I can give that will
convince you that what I offer is  real."

	Offer?  What the hell was she talking about?  "Um... what offer? Your
deal?"

	"Yes," she replied.  "Choose.  Choose a female from this crowd and I
will give you a demonstration of  what I am offering."

	Ken wanted to refuse.  The last thing he needed was a scene in the mall. 
He had no desire to be arrested  and if this woman accosted someone it would
take a long time to convince the police that he wasn't involved in  whatever she
was about to do.  Hell, he didn't even know her name!   Ken started to get up.

	"Choose one now."

	Ken froze.  For a second he was unable to take his eyes from the woman. 
She was achingly beautiful  and overwhelmingly desirable.  At that point, he
would do anything for her.  He scanned the crowd and the  pressure to obey her
eased.  The girl they had spoken of earlier was just finishing her meal and
getting up to go.   He could have chosen her, but decided not to.  If he did,
how would he ever know if this had been a put up job?

	He started looking for another woman.  It was a hot day and this was a
popular mall, so there were many  women with very little clothing to hide their
charms.  He picked one at random, a hot blond with a cropped shirt  and small
breasts who was heading toward a table with her tray.  She had long, tan legs
with very short shorts  on and tennis shoes with low sports socks on.  Ken
turned to tell the woman of his choice and when he did, she  only smiled at him
and nodded for him to look back over his shoulder.

	He did and saw the blond stop for a moment, the continue, this time
heading straight for their table.  She  had a relaxed, sexy smile on her face
and said not a word to Ken as she sat down at their table.  Her eyes were  glued
to the woman.

	"Tell us your name, sweetheart," said the woman.  The sound of her voice
alone was almost enough to  make him cum. 

	The girl shivered and goose bumps appeared on her arms.  The points of
her nipples were easily visible  beneath her top.

	"Connie."

	"Hello Connie.  You can call me Lea and this is Kenneth"

	"Hi Lea."  Connie's voice was soft, and somewhat tentative.  Her skin
was starting to get flushed and her  breathing increased.  Ken wasn't in much
better shape.  Idly he wondered how Lea had known his name.

	Lea smiled, and if Ken could have cum right there, he would have. 
Connie gave a soft moan and closed  her eyes for a second.

	"There are so many things you'd like to do, wouldn't you Connie.  But
you are afraid - afraid that if you  were found out, no one would like you.  But
you're wrong.  You can tell us what you'd like."

	Connie actually whimpered this time as Lea leaned close to her.  "It's
OK Connie.  Tell us.  Tell us a  little about yourself, then tell us what you
would like to do to me.  Because I will let you do it, and I will not  make fun
of you.  I will enjoy every second of what you wish to give me."

	Connie was panting now and sweat had formed on her chest.  "I'm nineteen
and I like sports and all the  normal stuff I guess.  I know it's in style for
girls to be bi-sexual and all, but while almost all the girls I know  *say* they
would sleep with another girl, I can tell that they're too afraid to actually do
it.  My problem is I  really want to.  But I want, need, to have the other woman
control me, make me experience her and tell me to  do whatever she wants me to
do."

	"But you want her to make you do certain things, don't you Connie?"
asked Lea.

	"Yes."  Connie's reply was almost a whisper, but it was full of sexual
need.

	The noise of the food court had faded away.  It seemed as if only the
three of them were there.  Lea's  voice was a low purr of erotic sound. "Tell me
Connie, what things do you want me to make you do?"

	"You should make me strip in front of you.  Make me masturbate while
begging you to let me eat you.  Make me show you how wet my panties are, tell me
to smell and taste them .  Don't let me cum though.  I want  to feel your
orgasm, I want you to squirt cum in my mouth, when I give you an orgasm. 
Completely fill it with  your cum - more than I could swallow.  Finally, when I
can take no more, I want you to make me push my  tongue deep into your asshole
while you whip my clit.  Then you let me have my orgasm."


	"You see Ken?  Does that sound nice to you?"

	Of course it did.  Sex between two women was one of Ken's top interests. 
He nodded, almost as  enthralled as Connie was.

	"Good, I thought it might."  Her voice now took on a more commanding
air.  Not overbearing, just calm,  confident and very, very sexy.  "Connie,
stand up and remove everything but your panties, socks and shoes."

	Connie stood and Ken's eyes bulged.  On the one hand, he was more
aroused then he'd ever been in his  life.  On the other hand, some small voice
in the back of his mind was screaming that they were in the middle of  a public
place.  He couldn't move though, couldn't utter a word.  The panic was there,
but over road by the  deepest lust he'd ever felt in his life.

	Connie smiled a sexy little smile.  Her movements showed that she was
somewhat shy about her body  (Shy! his mind screamed, we're in the middle of a
fucking mall!!), but that she was going to do as she had been  told.  She
reached for the bottom of her crop top and pulled it over her head.  Her bra was
thin and white.  She  unsnapped it and slowly removed it, exposing white breasts
with small but very erect, pink nipples.  She put her  clothes on the chair
behind her and reached for her shorts.  She unsnapped them and wiggled out of
them.   When she bent to pick them up, Ken almost groaned.  Her ass was SO hot,
and the tiny pair of black panties did  nothing to hide it.

	"Put your hands behind your head and let us look at your Connie."

	The girl complied and the position lifted up her breasts and displayed
them very well.  Ken admired her  flat stomach with the small ring in her belly
button.  Why hadn't he noticed that before?

	Lea spoke to him.  "You notice the belly button ring?  It was not there
before, but Connie has wanted  one for years.  Her mother has told her no, but
for this fantasy, I thought it would be nice for her to have it.

	"Now Connie, I know you want to eat my pussy, don't you?"

	"Yes... please, I really do."  Connie's voice was almost a whisper, but
Ken had no trouble hearing her.

	"You'll have to prove it to me though.  You are so beautiful.  Play with
yourself.  Play with your tits and  cunt and show me what a little slut you are. 
If I believe you are enjoying it enough, I'll allow you to eat me."

	The crude words coming from Lea's mouth sort of shocked Ken.  But
looking at Connie, he could  somehow tell that they were a part of her fantasy.

	"Yes ma'am."  She said as she turned and moved her food tray out of the
way.   She lay back on the table  with her pussy pointing toward Lea and her
legs widely spread.  With one hand she rubbed her cloth covered  pussy and with
the other she started pinching and pulling her nipples.  Lea motioned for Ken to
join her on her  side of the table and pushed her chair back from it.  For a
moment, Ken was completely distracted by seeing the  rest of Lea.

	She was absolutely the most perfect woman he'd ever seen.  Her legs,
well displayed by an extremely  short skirt, where long and lean.  The high
heeled sandals she wore graced a beautiful pair of feet.  He was  unable to tell
more since she was sitting down, and his appreciation of her was interrupted by
a groan from the  teen now writhing on the table.

	"Please mistress, please.  Oh, let me eat you, please, god please sit on
my face and use my mouth."

	Lea smiled as she rose from her chair and Ken was completely captivated
by her looks.  A very slim  waist and hips that flared just perfectly and made
him want to put his hands around her and bend her over.... 	 	"Later
Ken.  Perhaps.  This is Connie's fantasy and there are no men in it."

	She turned to the girl on the table and Ken eyes were drawn to her
sweating form.

	"Pull off those panties.  Show me how much you want me.  And Connie,
it's 'Goddess' not 'God'."

	In a flash, Connie lifted her hips and slid off her panties.  She sat up
on the table, her legs spread with  the panties in one hand offering them to
Lea.

	"Show me, turn them inside out.  Show me your wetness."

	Connie blushed, but complied and Ken's eye's drifted between her legs. 
Her pussy was quite beautiful  and she obviously kept it neatly trimmed.  There
was a strip of dark blond hair on her mons and each outer lip  also had neatly
trimmed hair on it.  Those swollen lips were open and the inner lips appeared to
be stuck  together from her wetness.  The area was red from her rubbing.

	"Show me your arousal.  Put your panties to your nose and inhale your
scent."  Connie complied, lifting  the cloth to her face and inhaling.  "Does
your scent arouse you?"

	"Yes Lea.  It is very sexy.  Please, I'd like to smell your scent. 
Please, will you let me?"

	"Soon,"  Lea smiled.  "It's almost time for that.  But first, it will
turn me on if I see you taste yourself.  If  you do that, if you taste yourself
from your panties, I will let you eat me."

	Connie seemed to be loosing her shyness.  With a coy look on her face,
she lifted the wet pad of her  panties to her face.  Her pink tongue emerged
from her lips and she slowly licked it, making a show of tasting  her lubricant.

	"Thank you Connie.  Now lay down so that I may use you for my pleasure."

	Ken didn't think he could get any more aroused, but he was wrong.  Lea
got on the table and squatted  over Connie's face while pulling up her skirt. 
Ken was mesmerized by the most perfect pussy he'd ever seen.   He could smell
her aroused scent, and it started to make him crazy.  He couldn't move, which
was the only thing  keeping him from taking out is cock and relieving himself
with his hand or better yet, plunging it into Connie's  soaked cunt.

	Connie was going wild, licking and slurping Lea's wet sex and moaning. 
Her hips were gyrating in the  air and her inner lips and opened.  Ken could
easily see her cream oozing from her small cunt hole.  But he only  glanced at
that.  He was really riveted to the junction of Lea's legs and the incredible
view of Connie pushing  her face as deep into that wonderful pussy as she could. 
Lea's hips were starting to rock and it appeared that her  orgasm was near.

	"This is Connie's fantasy, Ken," said Lea.  "Remember that all fantasies
are not realistic, or they  wouldn't be fantasies.   Connie wanted her mouth
filled with my cum and women don't produce that much fluid.   But I will.  For
her, I will fill her mouth to overflowing because that is what she wants."

	With that comment, Lea began to shudder.  She grabbed Connie's nipples
in her fingers and pulled the  small nubs far from her breasts.  Connie
squealed, but Ken could see thick fluid beginning to run down her  cheeks.  He
could see her throat working as she swallowed Lea's cum.  Still, he couldn't
move and his desire  rose almost to the point of madness.

	Lea ceased her shuddering and spoke while lifting her sex slightly off
Connie's mouth.  "That was  excellent Connie.  You're a very good little cunt
licker.  But that's not all I want and you know it."

	"Oh please mistress.  Don't make me do that.  Please, it's so degrading. 
Tell me you'll just let me cum."

	Ken remembered, through his sexual haze, that Connie had asked to be
made to tongue fuck Lea's ass.   He wondered how Lea was going to make that come
true.  He didn't wonder long as he saw a pair of nipple  camps and a crop in
Lea's hands.

	"Remember Ken - it's a fantasy.  She wants this."  Lea, still squatting
over Connie's face as she attached  the clamps to the girl's small nipples. 
Connie squeaked each time, panting through her nose.  A large drop of  Lea's
cunt juice slid off one perfect lip to land on Connie's mouth.  Lea then took
the crop and slapped it on  Connie's open sex.  The girl groaned, but didn't
even try to close her legs.

	The crop fell again and Lea started pulling on the chain between the
nipple clamps.  "Beg me.  You need  it and you know it.  Beg to eat my ass, to
slide your tongue into it."

	But Connie resisted, and her nipples were pulled even harder and the
crop fell between her legs with a  rather loud splat.  Ken was beyond arousal
now, he had never before experienced the feelings running through  him.  The
mall was completely forgotten and he was as captivated as Connie was by what was
happening.  The  crop fell again and he almost groaned out loud.  BDSM was his
top sexual interest and this was almost too  much for him to take.  Connie's
hips were jerking with each fall of the crop and Lea was now cruelly pulling on 
the nipple chain.

	"She loves this - it's been one of her darkest fantasies for years.  To
have someone 'make' her do these  things," said Lea looking at Ken.  She
returned her attention to the girl beneath her.  "Beg me slut.  I won't stop 
until you do."  The crop slapped down harder and Connie yelped.  But her hips
were rising to meet the crop.

	"Please, PLEASE, let me do it.  I'll tongue fuck your asshole, but don't
stop!"

	Lea pushed her asshole over Connie's mouth, and Ken saw the teen's
tongue start to lick over the  sensitive hole.  Lea's cunt was really leaking
and juice was dribbling down onto Connie's chin and throat.  It  didn't take
long for Connie to spear Lea's asshole with her tongue and push deep.  Lea
didn't let up on the girl  either.  She ground her ass onto the teen's face and
continued to pull her nipples and whip her cunt with the  crop.

	Soon, Ken could hear the muffled shrieks of the girl as she came.  Her
whole body stiffened and her  chest flushed a deep red as the crop smacked her
sex again and again.  Finally, exhausted, the teen stopped  moving and Lea got
off the table.  The crop and nipple clamps were nowhere to be seen.  Nor was
Connie's  bellybutton ring.  Ken's arousal, however, had diminished not at all.

	Lea pulled down her skirt and sat in the chair next to Ken.  She wasn't
flushed at all, but looked very  smug.  The only real evidence of what she'd
done was the strong scent of sex surrounding her and a sort of  glowing deep in
her eyes.

	They watched as Connie got off the table and leaned over to kiss Lea. 
Lea returned the kiss while  running her hands over the girl's body.

	"Get dressed now lover,"  said Lea.

	Ken watched the girl get dressed and sit down on the chair, her eyes
never leaving Lea.  She looked  peaceful and very content, but there was no
other evidence that anything had happened .  Ken was anything but.   His lust
was not diminished at all.

	"Would you like me to relieve you Ken?  If you sit on the table, I will
ease your lust."

	Ken found he could move again.  Somehow, the fact that they were in the
crowded food court still didn't  impinge directly on his consciousness.  He
quickly sat on the table, and Lea opened his pants and freed his  cock.

	She bent her lips to it, and breathed on it slightly.  Ken's hips jerked
in response.  He could never  remember a time when he'd been this sensitive.  If
she put her mouth on it, he was sure that he'd only last about  a second.

	Lea slid her lips over his cock and took him right down to the root. 
The feeling was incredible - no  blowjob he'd ever had, had felt like her mouth
closing on his flesh.  Ken's penis wasn't overly long, but it was  very thick. 
He'd never had  a woman able to take that much of it, never mind take it with
such ease.  The  resulting explosion of cum that he expected, however, did not
occur.  Pleasure like he'd never known flowed  through his body as she expertly
milked his organ with her tongue.

	He was now getting a little wild.  She was almost overloading him with
pleasure with just her mouth.   His frantic humping motions produced no gagging
or recoil from Lea, she simply and easily accepted his cock,  raising and
lowering his pleasure, playing him in ways he'd never thought were possible. 
When he finally  came, long after he'd thought he would, he almost passed out. 
He literally saw stars as he pumped load after  load into Lea's eager mouth.

	She knew just when to stop the friction, just how long to hold him in
her mouth and just when to release  him.  He'd had good sex before, or at least
he thought that he had.  This was something beyond any experience  he'd ever
had.

	When he finally regained enough strength, he put his cock back into his
pants and looked at the woman  who had just so thoroughly pleased two lovers. 
She was still the sexiest woman he'd ever seen and the glow  had returned to her
eyes.  He wondered if he should offer to please her.  He wondered if he even
could.  Ken felt  contentment and peace suffuse his body and mind in a way that
he'd never felt before.

	When he got off the table, after zipping up his pants, the sounds and
smells of the food court returned.   He looked around somewhat confused, then
realized that considerable time had passed.  There was so much to  ask and
figure out and he had to be back at that fucking job!

	"Sit Ken," said Lea.  "Now that the edge is off, perhaps it is time to
speak of our deal."  She smiled and  looked at Connie.  "My dear, you have been
wonderful.  But perhaps you should finish your lunch at another  table, hmm?"

	"Oh, yes.  Umm, I'm sorry, it just looked like there was nowhere else to
sit.  I'm sorry to have disturbed
you."

	"Oh it was no problem, dear," replied Lea.  "Perhaps we'll see each
other again."

	"I'd like that, " said Connie with a small smile.  She had a bit more
sway to her hips as she walked to an
empty table, and she glanced over to look back at Lea once.

	Ken was quite alarmed, now that he could think clearly again.  What the
hell had just gone on?  Surely,
that had to have been a hallucination!  People didn't just fuck unnoticed in the
middle of a  mall with no one
commenting on it!

	But the dampness of his cock in it's still slightly thickened state
attested to the fact that something had
happened. 

	"You are confused," said Lea. "There is no need to be confused or
alarmed.   No one noted what
happened, any more than they would note the details of a persons daydream.  Look
at your watch."

	Ken did and felt the blood drain from his face.  There was no way,
absolutely no WAY that only five
minutes had passed since Lea had walked over here.

	"What the fuck is going on?  Who ... what are you?"  Ken would have
started to rise, but those eyes held
him to his chair.

	"As I have said, there is nothing for you to be worried about.  So,
shall we speak of my deal?"

	Ken found he was still quite afraid, but he couldn't leave.  Licking dry
lips he said, "OK, so what is this
deal?"

	"Would you like the power to do what I just did?  To know the fantasies
of a woman, to grant them,
experience them for yourself?"

	"You're kidding, right?  I'm not even sure *I* believe what just
happened.  This is a lot to think through,
to accept, "  replied Ken.

	"Yes, it is.  But I will tell you that my offer is real.  I can, and
will if you so desire, give you that power."

	"But why?  I mean, let's just say that I can get my brain around all
this and believe that it happened. 
Why would you give that power to me?"

	Lea leaned back in her chair.  "When you have come to believe that I can
give you this power, I will tell
you.  It is important that you understand why I would grant it to you before you
accept it."  She slid something
across the table to him.  It was a ring sitting on a piece of paper.

	"What's this?" he asked, not daring to touch it.

	Lea smiled.  "Once you leave here, you will begin to doubt that this
ever happened.  You will convince
yourself that you were daydreaming.  So.  Take the ring and wear it - it goes on
your right forefinger.  You will
know then that this did happen and what I offer you is real.  When you finally
decide, speak my name and we
will talk again."

	Ken looked at the ring.  The metal was the same copper color as her
hair, and the oval stone was the
same green as her eyes.  He looked up to ask another question but saw she was
gone.  Ken half stood and
looked around, but there was no sign of her in the crowd.


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