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The Greatest Submission

Part 1

The Greatest Submission

The Greatest Submission

Written by Hawk_Fann and Sbbe, his Slave

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WARNING!  THIS IS A WORK OF EROTIC BDSM FICTION.  

 

IT IS ADULT ORIENTED MATERIAL OF A SEXUAL NATURE.  

 

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 The Author does not condone any of these actions, this is fantasy, make believe, you know day dreaming.

 

 Copyright 2006, Hawk Fann & Sbbe.  All rights reserved.

 

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Kimberly looked at the picture she knelt before. The woman was beautiful.

“Kimberly.”

“Please sir,” she sobbed, “please sir.” She screamed as the hood dropped over her face.

 

Kimberly lay on her side, her legs pulled up, her arms tied tightly behind her. She tried to roll a bit but having her elbows pulled together made it hard. She sobbed into the mask covering her face. She could feel the moisture on her face, sweat, tears, and mucus from her running nose. He’d never zipped her mouth shut in the mask before. Today he’d worked the big red ball in then pulled the mask down the rest of the way. She couldn’t help it she sobbed again. The noise was moist and disgusting she couldn’t imagine what she looked like huddled in the corner of the dungeon.

 

I can’t, she thought, I can’t, but I must. “Kimberly,” she turned her hooded face toward him. He was over her. She hadn’t even heard his footsteps. “I imagine it’s been a long night girl.” She felt his hand on her shoulder. She moaned, every part of her ached. “Are you ready to be obedient girl?”

 

Kimberly tried to nod but she could only lower her chin deeper into her chest ashamed. “Girl you have never given me this much trouble.” His voice was calm, no anger apparent. “Then let’s find a way to persuade you to change your willful attitude to one of obedience.”

 

Kimberly screamed into the gag, as he lifted her to her feet, her naked body shivering from the contact with the tile floor of the shower. The pins and needles overwhelming as her arms popped free of the long sleeve she’d worn for the night. She reeled, only his strong hands kept her from falling.

 

“Kimberly, it doesn’t have to be this way,” he said as he massaged her arms and shoulders. “The moment you choose to obey me the hood comes off and I’ll put you in a hot bubble bath. I’ll wash your hair girl and make you feel wonderful.”

 

She couldn’t help it the sobbing started again and she struggled to breathe. He held her for a time then slowly lifted her aching arms. She could feel the cuffs being snapped into place. Her feet planted firmly on the ground he slowly let her go. The chains stopped her from hitting the floor her arms jerked as her weight left his arms. She screamed into the gag again. She could feel the slobber escaping her mouth, dripping down her neck under the mask. She shook her head violently. She would not do it. She heard the winch engage.

 

“No,” she screamed into the gag unheard by her master.

 

Her feet left the floor. She hung limply unable even to struggle. Her naked flesh completely exposed, chilled, her body temperature dropping and involuntary shivers running through her body. His hand ran over her back after an eternity of waiting. She felt him press the rod against her back. She shook her head, “No,” wasn’t understandable but clear in her body language.

 

Stroke after stroke dropped down her back, over her trembling buttocks, down her legs. He stopped, she felt his body press into her throbbing back. His breath touched her neck, her ear, he was breathing hard. “A disobedient sub is a humiliation to her master.” The words tore at her heart. She was over come, she nodded, once then again and again. She would do anything, anything for him.

 


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