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Tante Ineke
Author: dennis haasnoot
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(Added on Dec 11, 2011)
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op bezoek bij mijn tante. het wordt een fijn bezoek |
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Jan 23, 2012 |
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Wel het was toch een leuk geil verhaal ondanks de opmerking van de onderstaande die overal wat van die commentaren schijnt te maken ongeacht de taal. Schrijf er gerust andere bij! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Dec 19, 2011 |
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First of all, writing in Flemish/Dutch on a site where the majority of the readers speak English, isn't the smartest move (and no, the number of readers next to the title are not actual readers but the number of "hits" the story got).
Secondly, dennis haasnoot has a long way to go as far as the technicalities of writing are concerned -punctuation, quotation marks for dialogue, the use of breaks in the right place, etc. ...
The story itself is just a small part lifted out of something bigger, way to short to stir one's imagination and too rushed to get beyond the point of mild interest.
In other words, lots of room for improvement here.
JJ (5/10)
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