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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
(Edit) |
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Jan 7, 2012 |
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PART 1:
A bit slow but there is hope this story line will become better and more exciting and enable me to give it more than an 8.
PART 2:
Now the story is getting interesting hence i have upped my rating to a ten. i hope we do not have long before chapter three is posted.
PART 3:
An excellent chapter. The story could stop at this point, but i do hope it will continue fopr many more chapters.
PARTS 4 - 6:
Excellent i really enjoyed these three chapters. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
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Nov 13, 2011 |
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Totally bemused as to how anyone could give this a ten. The punctuation is abysmal, speech marks are those horribe squares when they exist and the people talk like sat navs, oh hand what action there is is minimal.
Get an editor and seperate the paragraphs, oh and listen to how people talk, and I dont mean "How to rebuild your Wal Mart Vibrator," Videos on Youtube (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chzwiz007
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Nov 12, 2011 |
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This is a pretty good story. I enjoy this sort better from the dominant male perspective. The time line seemed to make sense and the characters were relatively well fleshed out. :)
Needed a second or third reading for grammar and splng. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
fitzgilbert
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Apr 15, 2010 |
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need to be continued. (9/10)
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