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DIABOLICAL
Author: J Lewis
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(Added on Oct 12, 2008)
(This month 32777 readers) (Total 71762 readers) |
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A society in Europe abducts young Americans, displaying and torturing them for amusement. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (8/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
ethics
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Oct 28, 2008 |
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Awesome, intense description of scene. Very inventive as well. There were some spelling issues, but not really a big deal. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
slave_george
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Oct 17, 2008 |
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Very well done. Hope that there will be many more chapters coming! (9/10)
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Reviewer:
masterdw
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Oct 16, 2008 |
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leather is supple not subtle. You mean crotch, crouch is what a catcher does, crotch is what he scratches. The torture is good, but there is no story. (6/10)
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Reviewer:
sirbor
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Oct 14, 2008 |
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Diabolical! Very nicely done. (9/10)
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Reviewer:
bullfinch
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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Good story-line. Well described torture. Some spelling mistakes. (8/10)
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