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Executive Submission
Author: Barthol
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(Added on Jul 5, 2008)
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I type a executive is suprised to finds himself letting two middleage women take control of him |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (5.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
caged
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Jul 12, 2008 |
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I think the first two reviews are on the harsh side. Admittedly I have a boner for blackmail stories in general, but I felt the casual, amused cruelty of the female characters came over very well.
I would definitely like to see more for of this story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Rowen
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Jul 12, 2008 |
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Story has some potential. However, one wonders why this man submits to those women all of a sudden. Would also love to know more about those characters. The description of his bondage is OK but somewhat unbelievable....one really doubs that those women would grant their newly fouund slave 2 orgams..Consider rewriting it (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
slavenaomi57
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Jul 7, 2008 |
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it was good but not good it could have been more exciting sorry but i dont lie (4/10)
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