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The Breeding Grounds
Author: Frisky Kattang
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(Added on Aug 19, 2007)
(This month 23031 readers) (Total 56931 readers) |
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Jake and Melissa come from two different worlds, but when Jasmine and Darrin make a business offer, Jake and Melissa become entangled in the same web. What seemed like a reasonable job offer soon turns into the unknown, as Jake and Melissa become slaves to their trainers, clay to their surgeon, and tools to the clients of "J&D Ranch". You'll follow them through their introduction and training in this, part 1, of a 3 part series. |
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| Reviewer:
biomaj5
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Sep 13, 2007 |
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loved it-couldn't stop reading it. Great attention to details! (9/10)
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cp_firefly
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Aug 30, 2007 |
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Loved the creativity of the modifications. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
SirThomas
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Aug 24, 2007 |
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Inventive and creative. A little too much 'acceptance'. A little more resistance might have been an interesting endeavor. Resistance might be futile but it's more fun! (8/10)
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Psylent1
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Aug 21, 2007 |
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Nice story and I do like the 21st century ponygirl ideas presented here. (9/10)
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moxie
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Aug 20, 2007 |
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This was a great story, one I will probably read again and add a lot of the aspects of it to my personal fantasies. This has increased my fantasies to be a pony girl ten-fold! (8/10)
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bbwsfslut
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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I enjoyed this alot. It's quite different for me to read of these types of activities. Great job! (9/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 19, 2007 |
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the intial part of the story was good, i will be waiting to see where the rest of the story takes me (8/10)
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