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Head!
Author: FAYE KANE
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(Added on Jul 17, 2007)
(This month 22134 readers) (Total 40410 readers) |
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Bizarre fantasy about what I want to be done to me. Warning: fucked-up and extreme. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
willman
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Aug 21, 2007 |
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To brief to have any development, impact or eroticism. Either develop your stories or develop a new hobby (4/10)
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Clevernick
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Jul 30, 2007 |
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As usual Faye writes her fantasies directly as a confessional rather than a story. The power of her warped imagination is experienced full force, as it would be if she spoke to you directly.
Like the subject, this story is just a disembodied head, lacking flesh and a body. If it ever is rewritten into a story it will be chilling indeed, and worth a much higher rating. Great outline. (7/10)
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Mad Lews
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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Way to short but a great imaginative plot line, chose one and "flesh it out" to a couple thousand words. you'd have a winner now would that be SciFi or Fantasy on the story code? (7/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 18, 2007 |
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nice layout for a story now all you need ot do it take the variuos part and make astory from them (5/10)
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Mothbrad
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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More an outline than a story, but still fairly effective, as is usual for Faye. If you ever have the time, this might work nicely as a proper story. (7/10)
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cum girl
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Jul 17, 2007 |
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Wow! A Faye Kane submission is always a good read, your imagination runs wild. I find your writings so bizarre. Good luck with your search, from a little sub to a major masochist. (7/10)
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