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Ivy League Sluts
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Apr 11, 2007)
(This month 363912 readers) (Total 513183 readers) |
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The story begins with the forced seduction of Stacy Todd, a scholastic overachiever enrolled at Harvard. Stacy falls under the control of Mike Cabreeze, a corrupt Cambridge cop. With the help of her dormmate, Portia, she is slowly transformed from a naïve young girl to a sophisticated woman with an unbounded sexual appetite. Forced by Mike to participate in a dizzying variety of perversions, she morphs from prey to predator. Rescued by a British billionaire who has dedicated his life to punishing the wicked, Stacy becomes a world class assassin. In the finale, she destroys Mike and his cohorts. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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real motivation to go to Harvard (9/10)
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Lovecraft
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Aug 26, 2008 |
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Excellent work! I'm still only a fourth of the way in, but the ride has been great so far.... as usual; Harry is my favorite author around here. He is very dirty and his sex scenes are quick and to the point. He can fit in more smutiness in a short, easy to read chapter than you can find in some stories, hehe. (10/10)
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subKatie69
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May 6, 2008 |
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not sure about all the bad reviews I have just started reading this story and it has already become one of my favs after just the first few chapters characters are excellent and as for some saying about giving away the plot in the synopsis well the exciting part of it is reading how it got to the points mentioned in that synopsis
keep up the good work harry and dont let the bad reviews get to you (10/10)
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oh_that_was_good
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Feb 17, 2008 |
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Excellent characters - I keep coming back to see if more of the story has been updated! (9/10)
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Minks
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Dec 16, 2007 |
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First of all, my apoligies if my English is not perfect, I'm Dutch.
Besides that, all I wanted to say is that frankly, I do not understand where all these low ratings come from. Like your other stories, I find it marvellous. It's got humor, it's thrilling, highly original and delightfully twisted. And the character of Portia is downright phenomenal.
True, it's a pity you decided to give away the plot already, but I'm sure you'll find ways to surprise us still.
I don't think you would do a thing like not posting the remaining chapters, like unfortunately so many writers here do, but to be safe side, I beg you to post the remaining chapters and if possible, at the same rate you posted the ones before.
Well, enough for the sucking up, post more! (9/10)
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Greg
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Aug 1, 2007 |
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I like short stories. Not this one. For one, story codes do not represent the narrative given; I was expecting F+/m+… You can change codes to enhance future reviews. Two, other stories you have written, by a host of reviewers, tells me you can do better… (2/10)
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- Let me begin by thanking you for taking the time to write a review. Reviews can be hard to fathom. Why would someone who prefers short stories select Ivy League Sluts? The synopsis states it is 67 chapters and 284,000 words. The average hard copy NY Times best seller is 80,000 words or less. The finished story is equivalent to more than three volumes. If one does not like romance novels or mysteries, why bother to read and review them?
It is my understanding codes apply to the work in total. If there is CBT in only Chapter 32 , I would specify the CBT code even though you can read 66 chapters without encountering CBT. As for missing f+/m+, several of the published chapters involve multiple members of both genders engaging in group sex. Does f+/m+ require uncounted hordes of writhing bodies?
Can I do better? Always! There is always a more descriptive word or phrase or a more interesting plot line.
I find it hard to believe the rating you applied. It is a carefully written, fully developed story with a beginning, middle, and end. It may not be to your taste but it does not deserve a 2 rating.
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Golden pussy
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Apr 24, 2007 |
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When I clicked on "Stories" that's what I expected to find. As it stands this is just a few paragraphs worth--nothing very exciting or brilliant.
(5/10)
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- Would you consider updating your review, now that there is more of the story present?
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abitbent
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Apr 17, 2007 |
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I suspect we'll get a couple of chapters, then a convenient link to a paysite to view the rest. What's presented so far is ok, however the synopsis was a more enjoyable read. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- In the 20 stories I have posted on the site, I have never included a link to a paysite. The comment is not justified by the evidence.
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Mr. Pete
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Apr 14, 2007 |
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You give away the whole story in the intro, so you've destroyed any plot twist or any attempt at building suspense. It sounds like you've finished the whole work, and yet you post only one very short chapter? There's not much to base a review on, but here goes. In addition to introducing the girl, the one other character that you develop in this first chapter is the old man, and even his simple character is all over the place (first he wants to help the girl, and then he's a pervert?). That was a seemingly pointless digression, although maybe he appears again later in the story? You could have avoided all of this by given us a reasonable amount of the story. (6/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Apr 13, 2007 |
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Actually the first chapter took pains to introduce a plot, conflict, suspense...a slow start, but a very good one. I look forward to reading more. (8/10)
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jchorner9
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Apr 12, 2007 |
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This is just a few of the first paragraphs of a larger story. While the actual writing is average, the lack of any plot or any of the elements of a narrative are lacking. Not one of the story codes given as a story description are represented. Downloading this as presented is a waste of time. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Harry Berg
(Edit) (Apr 12, 2007)
- You acknowledge Chapter 1 is part of a larger story then take a critical tack because the chapter is not a complete story in and of itself. This is not a collection of short stories. I made a point of stating there were numerous chapters. It would seem appropriate to withhold comment until more of the story is available.
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Curtis
(Edit) (Apr 14, 2007)
- It would seem to be reasonable to withold posting until you have completed enough story to be worth reviewing.
- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2007)
- Now that there is more of the story posted, would you consider updating your review?
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