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Disciplinary Measures Author: Elfingers
(Added on Mar 3, 2007) (This month 19569 readers) (Total 38606 readers)
A district nurse is required to administer corporal punishment to two teenage children.

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Average Rating: (7.5/10)
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Reviewer: npatek (Edit) Rating: Mar 14, 2007
It's evil and 100% immoral - simply delicious. I like your description of the hard whippings very much. And the sadistic nature of the women is well described. Where the boy sits on her lap is probably the best scene. There meets the containment of the mother and the fear for her punishment. I would like to hear more of this fear. The youngsters would obey all commands without hesitation. I would like to smell their fear, when they are asked something. A little more direct speech would make the scenes more vivid. I would like to see the delinquents lick the shoes to thank for their punishment. Of course the story is unrealistic hard. A little more realistic description would add to the impact. Please give me more of this fine stuff. (10/10)

Reviewer: azrlg17 (Edit) Rating: Mar 6, 2007
The stepmother doesn't want to spoil her relationship with the father so she hires someone to whip his kids until they faint from the pain? Yeah right ROTFL. The nurse does it even though if that ever comes to light she will loose her license, her job and probably go to jail? Reeeaaaallly? I think not. The whole basis of the story is just ridiculous. Yeah there are probably many child abusers but do they really hire a nurse to do it? I don't think so. (4/10)
Replied by: takarada (Edit) (Mar 7, 2007)
your on the wrong forum, go away

Reviewer: chksng19 (Edit) Rating: Mar 4, 2007
An interesting story, tightly written and moving right along. Interested in more, please (7/10)

Reviewer: manwitdog (Edit) Rating: Mar 3, 2007
spelling mistakes and grammar spoilt a decent developing story (6/10)

Reviewer: bobby44 (Edit) Rating: Mar 3, 2007
Very enjoyable, well written. Not my fetish but so well written that it stirred me as well. Congradulations on such a fine narration. (9/10)

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