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Teen Katies humiliation
Author: Rick Philips
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(Added on Jan 21, 2007)
(This month 31702 readers) (Total 48119 readers) |
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Little 13 year old sexy teen Katie gets humiliated visually as she is asked to fill in for a nude modelling class when the model hird didnt show up. This is slow story (NO SEX) about a sexy young girl having to strip in front of men and boys... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Efos
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May 20, 2007 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Eikskaloe
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Feb 28, 2007 |
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Excellent (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
kraemder
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Feb 28, 2007 |
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I liked it a lot. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jan 23, 2007 |
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As a fantasy for yourself, Rick, fine. Should you expect others to share it, it must be written clearly and yes, with concern about grammar. People here write and accept criticism to help them improve. Why not, rather than argue, take the story back out and fix it? (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
GarrickBailley
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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yeah I have to say I agree with mkemse, this was ridiculous. Also, the grammar was pretty awful. (3/10)
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- Replied by:
rich-924
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2007)
- hello...well... sorry u didnt like it.. I was not certianly concerned about grammar...oh well. cant please them all.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 21, 2007 |
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the story is to unrealistic even in these days and times, this would never hapen to a 13 year (5/10)
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- Replied by:
rich-924
(Edit) (Jan 22, 2007)
- guys.... this is all about fantasy.. its a freakin story for crying out loud...<<<>>>>
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