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Shall We Dance?
Author: Mad Lews
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(Added on May 25, 2005)
(This month 10423 readers) (Total 25712 readers) |
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A submissive wife is brought to a club where she and her husband will perform for an audience. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (9/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 26, 2009 |
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To be honest, the first time I read this, I wasn't that impressed. But I musn't have been in the right mood (or else just come off another highly impressive story), because, upon re-reading, I cannot do else but join in the praise of the other reviewers.
Which shows again that you should read every story you don't like too much, at least twice.
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
tessa
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Jan 29, 2007 |
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A tantalizing read from start to finish. Erotic sensuality beautifully stained each and every word. Quite a delightful image played out in words. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jan 31, 2007)
- I read your review to Lews and he's still grinning from ear to ear. Careful gurl,I think he's in love.
Mad
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| Reviewer:
uppitywoman
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Jun 2, 2005 |
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Fantastic storyline, plot, descriptions, characters & action. Highly recommended reading. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2007)
- Why thank thee kindly my dear uppity woman. Your review was succinct and to the point. More importantly ( to me) you really liked the story.
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| Reviewer:
orchidsoul
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Jun 1, 2005 |
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This is emotional, sensual, hot and erotic...
The story is well developed and wonderfully descriptive. Very well written- it's concise and your words create cadence in the story. Her desires are fierce, her submission loyal, and his command is unquestionable. I'm convinced it's part of his master plan! I hope the story continues. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jun 1, 2005)
- Gee Orchidsoul you just don't know how excited I get when I hear you say Master, what's that,
Master Plan? His Master plan?
Uhm yeah, sure right over here on the drawing board Though if it was up to me, well she seems nearly perfect but he might need a remedial Master class or two. Now that would be a twist.
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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May 27, 2005 |
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Those of you, out there, who’ve been craving a little sensuality in their porn diet will devour this one.
To the author’s credit, his (yes, his) story is filled with finely tuned emotion – his and hers. The descriptions are good and clean without bogging the reader down in too many irrelevant details.
It’s certainly worth taking a look at, for the pleasure of good writing as much as a good read.
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 27, 2005)
- Ahh Alex, you always could make the boys blush. THank you for the most generous review
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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May 27, 2005 |
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Excellent, this could easily be put into an anthology of erotic BDSM stories. The dynamic played out between the husband and wife, her struggles in her role and the role she wants are right on target. It's believable, hot and very well done. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jun 23, 2005)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 31, 2005)
- Wow Ruby, you certainly know how to stroke a guys ego. And a ten too, eat your heart out Bo.
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| Reviewer:
LordVetinari
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May 27, 2005 |
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Interesting story. I would have liked something a bit harder-edged, but this was still quite well-written, and well worth a read. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (Jul 29, 2007)
- Honestly M'Lord you fool no one, we all know that under that bejeweled exterior beats the heart of a hopeless romantic. Still if it will ease your enjoyment next time we'll use the crop or a single tail, and perhaps it will feel a bit harder edged ;-)
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| Reviewer:
BDSgirl
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May 26, 2005 |
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i liked it a lot. tight story line, but good descriptive passages, insightful yet not bogged down in introspection. i enjoyed the problem she has. i can identify.
more please (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 27, 2005)
- Thank you for the review, It's always great to hear your story is appreciated. I'm glad/sorry you can relate to her problem. Is that more please as in "Sir may I please have another?" ;-)
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BDSgirl
(Edit) (May 27, 2005)
- *the girl slips into His den, walks over to His desk, slides to her knees, head bowed, her eyes look up to Him*
"please Sir, may i have another one?"
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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May 25, 2005 |
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Wow, this was really good! You managed to do very well from the female perspective. I loved the total submission, yet intrusive reality your heroine experienced. The detailed descriptions were wonderful. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Mad Lews
(Edit) (May 25, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, My quest is to capture the psyche of the female submissive. I'm aware it is a windmill I'm tilting at, but I'm foolish enough to keep trying. I'm glad you enjoyed the story
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