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Author: kemosabe
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(Added on Jul 20, 2004)
(This month 58114 readers) (Total 115086 readers) |
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93 is the number assigned to Denise Howard as she is sentenced to prison for prostitution |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
headhunter
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Apr 28, 2005 |
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I especially enjoyed the victim's realization, and then acceptance, of her latent masochism. Unlike some other comments, I thought the brevity of the descriptions was just enough to trigger my own imagination. Well done! (9/10)
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bisarah
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Mar 13, 2005 |
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that was some story! it was very well-written and it make my pull our my vibe!!! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2005)
- Thanks, Sara. Sorry I couldn't be there to help you.
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redEva
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Mar 5, 2005 |
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i liked it, and that must have to do with the writing style, because the topic is not something i usually get interested in. it was not to long, and the pacing was good. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2005)
- Thank you, redEva.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 30, 2004 |
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Stimulating story in a genre grown tired by overuse. Tight writing, good character delineation, audience wants more. Can't do a whole lot better unless you can figure out a way to do a fresh sequel.
Wouldn't mind seeing that, by the way. Nice job, Lone Ranger! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Mar 6, 2005)
- Thank you, chksng19
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 27, 2004 |
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there are very few story much better then women in prison, they are a great subject and this one is even the better, hope there is more in the future of this or some similar to it, great job (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2004)
- Thanks, mkemse, you've made my day!
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| Reviewer:
Lord Thomas
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Jul 25, 2004 |
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For a women in prison theme, this tops most of that genre.
I would say I would like more developmet, but an excellent story overall.
LT (8/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jul 25, 2004)
- Thanks for your comments. As I have previously responded, brevity is a hallmark of my stories. Somehow, I am unable to adapt a theme to 30 chapters as many have done.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Jul 22, 2004 |
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I liked this one better than the previous reviewers did. Yes, the woman in prison theme is overdone, but there is very little truly original on this site. Prison, kidnapped, blackmail, rape. Everyone uses the same themes. You could have left out the dogs and I would have been happier. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2004)
- OK, less dogs and more detail. Someday I'm going to submit a story that everyone thinks is a "10". Until then, I appreciate your kind comments.
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| Reviewer:
mickydoughty
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Jul 20, 2004 |
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Well written piece of work. Women in prison theme, often a safe bet to get the readers. However, with most stories of this kind the writer rushes head long in to trying to describe as much punishment as possible, but does it rather briefly. Please slow down, and with each sitution abit more detail is needed to enable the reader to believe in it. I really enjoy this theme in stories, but often am let down, by the shortness of the piece and the rush to describe (very briefly) all the humiliation the writer can think of.
I would have been happier with abit more of a description of the situations and expanding the story. Hence the low rating, but did enjoy what I read. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jul 21, 2004)
- Points well taken Micky, but brevity is a failing of all of my stories (if you can call it that). I have always felt that the reader should imagine as much as possible. Stories that go on for several pages with the same theme tend to put me to sleep.
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Jul 20, 2004 |
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This interesting POV is told in the first person of life gone bad down south of the U.S. border. (7/10)
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