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Let's Go! Author: Kray
(Added on Jul 31, 2003) (This month 15259 readers) (Total 29856 readers)
Meanwhile he fits her for her abduction, he gives her some anticipations of her new life.

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Weighed Average (?): (5.5/10)
Average Rating: (6/10)
Highest Rating: (9/10)
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Reviewer: Master T (Edit) Rating: Apr 15, 2011
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz (3/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Jan 18, 2004
like the concept, but very hard to read (9/10)

Reviewer: brsam (Edit) Rating: Aug 4, 2003
The author grammer was a little hard to follow, but it left me wanting to read chapter two. (7/10)
Replied by: Kray (Edit) (Aug 7, 2003)
Thank you, Brsam, for your compliments, and thank you for the "little".
Unfortunately "Let's Go!" is finished.
But I have in preparation another story "The Cage", that talks abuot a joung girl just abducted.
I will publish it hereafter.
Regards
Kray

Reviewer: lex ludite (Edit) Rating: Aug 2, 2003
I presumed this was some kind of a parody on every cliched abduction story ever written, right down to the strange dialogue, super-sized tampons, odd bondage position and torture implements that change from sentence to sentence. Then I stepped back and realized that was not the truth! Too bad, it might have been a much better idea than what has been executed(in more ways than one)here. (4/10)

Reviewer: Emily (Edit) Rating: Aug 2, 2003
It needs some improvement in its style. It was too matter-of-fact. (5/10)
Replied by: Kray (Edit) (Aug 2, 2003)
Oh, Emily,
So thank you!
You are the first one who criticizes my contents instead of my (terrible) form.
I would really appreciate a little more extensive comment from you, will you be so kind to send it me?
Regards
Kray

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