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Rose Takes a Day Off
Author: BDSM_Tourguide
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(Added on Nov 4, 2002)
(This month 91056 readers) (Total 198053 readers) |
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Rose was the high school bitch. She came from a wealthy family and thought she could have anything she wanted. Now, she is in college, but her attitude has not changed. One of the people Rose used to pick on constantly in high school, Richard, now looks to adjust Rose's attitude. Richard blackmails and kidnaps her, leading her into a life of slavery. Will she be able to maintain her snobbish attitude or will her new life teach her something about respect? |
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| Reviewer:
tellmeyourstory
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Apr 27, 2016 |
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Excellent story! Characters very well developed. Really liked how Rose tried hard to repress her thoughts of looking at the big picture of life, and how her forced captivity made her face realizations she'd tried to repress. I also liked how John (may not have gotten the name right) was motivated by teaching her a listen, not purely lust and regular BDSM fucking.
Very good story but I found myself wanting more, especially to have Rose go back to her famiily and explain the realizations she's had.
Some grammatical errors, could be easily fixed by a decent editor.
All in all, well done story. Bravo! Encore! (9/10)
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routi
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May 7, 2008 |
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My one regret in reading this story is that it really does not have an ending. It left me wanting to know what happens next. I am wondering if it will ever be finished? would have liked to have seen Roses return to civilization and school,as well as the developing relationship between her and Richard in the "real" world (10/10)
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Maitre1962
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Oct 30, 2007 |
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I enjoyed reading the story. What a pity,it was not continued further! I would have liked to have seen Roses return to civilization and school,as well as the developing relationship between her and Richard in the "real" world. (9/10)
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littleone_
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Mar 21, 2006 |
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My one regret in reading this story is that it really does not have an ending. It left me wanting to know what happens next. I am wondering if it will ever be finished? (10/10)
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frellinghell1
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Mar 15, 2005 |
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One of the best stories that I have read on this site so far. A well constucted plot with good characterisation. The two protagonists had well developed and believable emotions towards each other and the situations they faced. On the whole a story of a very high standard that left me wanting more at the end of each chapter (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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everything you do is a 10, this one is not exception (10/10)
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XtremeInk
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Nov 11, 2003 |
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I think the story is pretty good. There are lot's of good scenes, and it is being developed nicely. That being said, however, I will add the following things:
1) The time of year keeps changing. First it was early May. Then it was Fall, then in one chapter it was June. If you get a chance, perhaps that should be fixed.
2) A great deal of time was spent on Rosie's state of mind and motivations in the first chapter or so. When she gave in, it was too easy.
3)Plus, we were given indications that she was a virgin, but then it turns out that she's a cock hound. Which is fine, but it would have more impact on the reader if we had a better idea of her sexual past. It's possible to put that in now, but it really should be added earlier in the story.
Anyway, overall, I think it's a good story and I'm looking forward to seeing where it's going to go.
Thanks for the read! (7/10)
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red_hot
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Nov 9, 2003 |
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Loved it. (10/10)
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xtreamgrace
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Nov 9, 2003 |
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I can't wait until the next chapter comes out (please tell me there is one! lol) (10/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Nov 9, 2003)
- There is one and this one won't take six months to get done like the last one did.
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pyromain
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Mar 2, 2003 |
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Good story can't wait for the next part (9/10)
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ellegirl
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Dec 20, 2002 |
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I'm enjoying the change in Rose over time. I sort of hope things improve for Rose a bit now that she's being cooperative. (8/10)
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ellegirl
(Edit) (Dec 17, 2002)
- I'm enjoying the change in Rose over time. I sort of hope things improve for Rose a bit now that she's being cooperative.
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Artemis
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Dec 12, 2002 |
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I have enjoyed this story so far and I look forward to new installments. I do like for stories to take their time developing as this one does b/c it usually adds depth to the story. I enjoy the dialogue between Rose and Richard as well as their own musings...very well written. :) (8/10)
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Moggy
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Nov 16, 2002 |
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(Nov 9, ch 1) I felt it was a faultering start to the new story, although I recognise the author is working on the development of the tale. The motivations of both characters were not explained, which is a major problem when both individuals are straying well away from normal behavior.
If their actions were purely to move the story to a blackmail/sex slave scenario, then that is rather disappointing. Sorry, BDSM Tourguide, that's my view so far. (6/10)
(Nov 16, ch3)The story is developing nicely. Well written dialogue and interaction between the two characters. Rose is apparently not happy living in the dog cage outside a shack in the middle of nowhere. Jeez, women are so hard to please sometimes! Still difficult to say where the story is going, which is fine in one respect, but ideally the reader's mind should be highly curious with the possibilities by now. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2002)
- Funny you should mention that. My next chapter deals with Richard's motivations. I don't know if they're justified or not, but it is a fantasy story after all.
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boccaccio2000g
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Nov 9, 2002 |
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8 - So far.<br>
The story is capably written, as one would expect from this author, but there are two problems, at least in the early going.<br>
First, the story moves very slowly, at least in this fairly long first installment. There is almost no sexual content and very little description of what is no doubt supposed to be a very attractive young woman. We are treated to an extended account of her shopping trip at the mall; anti-shopper that I am, I'd prefer a more detailed description of Rose herself.
<br>Second -- and this is a big problem for all of us writers -- Richard's motivation is too weak. He's depicted as both rational (OK, slightly obsessive) and highly intelligent, but he's willing to risk a lifetime of imprisonment (or capital punishment) for kidnapping. Why? Because she picked on him. <br> <br>I'm sure that such things have happened, that women have been abducted and mistreated for poorer reasons than that. But not, I don't think, by rational, intelligent men.<br>
In fairness I should add that that complaint - insufficient motivation in terms of risk/reward possibilities - could be lodged against the vast majority of the serious-to-heavy stories here. <br>
That's one of the reasons I prefer stories with a historical setting -- one rarely has to worry about the law-and-order apprehension and punishment considerations that hover, usually un-noticed, over almost any BDSM story with a contemporary American or western European setting.<br>
The fifty-yard line rendezvous seems a bit far-fetched to me too.<br>
I don't want to pass over the good things in this story, though. Rose is one of the best-drawn characters I've seen around here; Tourguide does a fine job depicting her self-centeredness and her materialism. Much of her dialogue and a lot of her stream-of-consciousness musings are really first-rate. The author has an excellent sense of how such a person might think and speak. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
BDSM_Tourguide
(Edit) (Nov 11, 2002)
- I am eventually going to get to the hows and whys. I'm just writing what's in my mind as it comes up. Besides, I kind of want it to be a little cheesy and campy. I wanted to wander a little from the rigid realism of my last effort.
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